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Reviews for Slaves

By : GabrielPierce
  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on August 24, 2005
    My first review didn't seem to 'take'.

    I really like your writing. You build some very intense scenes.

    I wish you'd add a chapter and figure out a way to make a happy ending for Paige and Amir...
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  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on August 24, 2005
    Oh, my...

    Very good, very hot.

    Wish I had a little more faith in Jay. He went from being kinda nice to being a real jerk.

    I wish you'd do another chapter and figure out a happy ending for Amir and Paige.
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