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Reviews for Pleasure Island-By LindaG and Foraoo.

By : Foraoo
  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on August 11, 2005
    What an excellent story - I love how you capture the pathos of each character.

    (Plus you can spell and your grammar is correct. )
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  • From ANON - Shanna on July 16, 2003
    I'm getting a Exit to Eden vibe here, except better ;)
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  • From ANON - D-sama on May 30, 2003
    Wow... This was kinda kinky, but very sweet! Reminds me of a story I once wrote, too. It's hard to read a story about my fave band, though. ::Sniff:: But I loved this one. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Yvonne on May 26, 2003
    Wow, I don't check up on this story for a few weeks and you finish the whole thing!
    And what an ending it was! I really can't give you two enough praise for this amazing fic. The whole concept in itself was brilliant, and then the twists, like Anton being Darren's father, just made it even more astounding. These last climatic chapters were possibly the best of the whole fic (though it's hard to say). The action and entwining motives never had a down point, and never grew confusing. Details were added at just the right moments, and the foreshadowing to Annabell-Lee's death and story was superb. Not to mention the sheer beauty of the Anabell-Lee motif you created with Poe's poem. I'm a sucker for that poem anway, but y'all brought it to life. At was absolutely gorgeous the way you integrated lines in with the plot and what people were saying, and made an incredibly powerful point about their love and her death.
    And finally, the epilogue was wonderful. A perfect tie-up of loose ends and emotions. A classic happy ending, not even because everyone was happy, but use use of the growth and gratification of the characters. Well, and because of the amazingly hot scene between Dar and Dan at the end, I mean come on, how could that not make for a h end ending?!

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  • From ANON - Harebell Jones on May 21, 2003
    Wow! Wow, wow, wow! What an amazing ending to an amazing story *happy sigh*
    I'm so glad it all ended this way. That Daniel finally seems to be able to satisfy his own needs =^__^=
    And I almost cried when reading this *sniff* It was just so beautifully written ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lamia on May 20, 2003
    Wow *is at the edge of her seat* This is brilliant! You guys have done an excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Zippy on May 13, 2003
    Oh my god that was such a good climax! I can't believe Williams evil ass is gone! And gone to hell!? Daniels bits were heartbreaking as was Darrens confusement at the end, nice to see Antons there for them tho. I can't wait to see what you guys are going to do next. One great fic. *Thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Zippy on May 11, 2003
    Can i just say: Williams parts are mesmorising. Truely.
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  • From ANON - Harebell Jones on May 10, 2003
    *shudders* If this story isn't scary as f*ck, then I don't know what is! After reading this yesterday I almost couldn't sleep! *shudders again*
    And, like Wolf, I'd like to get a gun and shoot that bastard to William Hayes myself! He really is insane!

    So, all in all, another incredibly well written chapter... And that's what I hate about it! It's so well written that you can't let it go... but you wish you could cause it's so damn scary... if you know what I mean. At least this was supposed to be a compliment *LOL*

    *sits in her corner to wait for the next scary chapter*
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  • From ANON - DazWolf on April 30, 2003
    *Thromps around the room.* Give me a gun and I'll shoot the...Okay, I'll be nice. You guys have created a bad guy that you just love to hate, and I hope he gets what he deserves by the end of this. It's always fun to see Darren startled, at least for me because it isn't usually an emotion that we really get to see from him. *Patiently awaits more...*
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  • From ANON - Yvonne on April 27, 2003
    I didn't want this chapter to end... seriously, I think it's been the best so far (and that's hard to say!)-- the action, the emotions, and dammit, that sweet, tender relationship between Darren and Dan just has me enthralled.
    The other characters that you've added in, especially those who have a major role in this chapter (Anton and Cryril) are wonderfully realistic, and I love how they have their own backgrounds and desires, instead of just complying easily which I think would be easier to lean to in a fic like this. So kudos to y'all for the extra effort in making such multi-dimensional characters-- and in Dar and Dan too.
    Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Lamia on April 22, 2003
    Great chapter, guys! Daniel's safe at last! ( maybe? ) Hope they'll escape the island in time! I just can't wait to read more.

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  • From ANON - Yvonne on April 15, 2003
    What a horrible place to leave this at! And this site seriously needs author alerts so I can know when you guys are updating! (Though reading two chapters at a time isn't so bad, lol)
    Wow. Amazingly horrific chapter, really. The parallels between Darren's mother and Daniel that you've created in Darren's mind are stunning and scary at the same time. And the painfully realistic imagry of Daniel's torture compared to Darren's experiance with Madam Kay and Richard... *shivers* Very well writeen, if not lightly disturbing.
    I'm looking foward to more!

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  • From ANON - Lamia on April 14, 2003
    Poor Daniel :'( They must do something to help him! Pls continue!
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  • From ANON - Zippy on April 13, 2003
    This chapter is my favourite so far It's so beautifully written and emotions so real, the story seems to get better with each entry. Your writing style is really great, i can't wait for the next lot.
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