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By : phanphic
  • From StickyVenom on March 06, 2008
    i have to say that this is quite possibly one of the best stories i have ever read outside of a novel. And thats not just because i'm a shakira fan either. It flowed with a great pace yet took its time with the details to paint vivid pictures in the minds eye without ever losing step. It was creative yet it didn't go so far as to make it unbelievable. I love this story and i think that more of it is in order or at the very least a new one with Shakira and how she is today.
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  • From TwilightPro101 on October 26, 2005
    Shakira is one hot number! This story just ups that sexiness to whole new level and I really love it!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Wow on October 13, 2005
    Wow, this is so fucking good! It is just fucking amazing! You have an alluring and amazing writing style. You make the reader want to read more and your sex scenes are so descriptive and wow! Please continue to write and you should try to get something published! :)
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  • From ANON - pheebly on August 04, 2005
    Well, firstly... since I adore Shakira that helped this story out. :) I like your writing style, first person without being cocky or Mary-Sueish. I also liked in chapter three how you included that 'Kira is just a person too; rejection is a fear for her too. The only thing that bugged me were the typos. I don't know if that was from uploading it or whatnot but it was distracting. Otherwise, very sexy story.
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  • From ANON - hostile-work-enviroment on December 27, 2004
    another chapter? pretty pretty please with sugar on top
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  • From ANON - a440 on September 29, 2004
    Doesen't Shakira talk in only her native Spanish?
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  • From ANON - oral on August 12, 2003
    Now THAT'S the best girlfriend EVER. Jane, you really have a grasp on things, don't you?

    Letting your girl sleep with Shakira if ever she got the chance...girl, you're a keeper!

    Okay, sorry. I know this isn't really feedback, but I couldn't resist.

    But REAL feedback is coming, I promise!!

    Love your outlook on life and your sense of humor...LOVE IT.

    Oral
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  • From ANON - Jane on May 26, 2003
    No Nina, my girlfriend does not get jealous. Because she knows that I would allow her to have sex with Shakira if she had the chance as well. I think that's fair, don't you? :-D
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  • From ANON - Nina on May 26, 2003
    I a g a good story, Jane, but really.. it's obviously a fantasy of yours. Doesn't your girlfriend/boyfriend get jealous? I would.... *stops typing to laugh uncontrolably* Sorry gorgeous. *giggles* I love you.
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