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Reviews for Better Days

By : Kashshaptu
  • From ANON - Sakuchan on September 05, 2005
    I like this fic of your,it's really sweet ^_^
    And Die is a perfect doctor,with that smile ^^
    Good job!
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  • From ANON - David on September 04, 2005
    I must say, I'm impressed, really. I only read bits and pieces over your shoulder once in a while, but never the whole story. I like it. I really do. In fact, I can't think of a bloody negative thing to say. Well, nothing substantial anyway. Personally I'm not really fond of the use of japanse words, even though hardly present, well, I've just got the feeling they don't really belong in the text. But that's me, doesn't really disturb me or anything. Overall it was a good read, story seems interesting, vocabulairy-wise it's top notch. In my opinion it's not really nessecary to hit 'Return' after each phrase, but if you think it makes things more readable I guess that'your call.
    It's a well written story you've got here, Emma. To be honest I didn't expect it to be 'this' good.
    *kiss*
    Please continue writing, you're good at it. o.o
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