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Reviews for Kiss Me, Kill Me

By : teacups
  • From daichild14 on July 31, 2008
    where did you go? i thought u died! please put more up! are you gunna continue soundtrack to a headrush? it's still awesome by the way. please don't disappear again; this was too good to go unfinished.
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  • From SallySkel on July 30, 2008
    YESSS!! Already I am liking it! (I just read chapter... one? :D) I can already see what you added, and I think it is definitely needed, seeing as it just forms the character more. Love it.

    :D
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  • From SlackerBitch on July 25, 2008
    The description is king. You really fleshed it out. It's amazing. I hope there is more chapters involved this time. . . A little more naughty parts would be ace.
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  • From SallySkel on July 24, 2008
    Well, I'm kind of borderline on rewriting. I mean... up until the part of Ryan/Lanie, it was awesome. The pacing was good, everything. I loved how you portrayed the characters, the dialogue, and the relationship with Frank. I would have liked it a bit more between the time Lanie slept with Ryan, but... :D I liked how it was like an outsider's POV through her head. It's hard to describe, but hopefully you get the gist of what I mean.

    Now, on the other side, it would be really cool to see what you could do differently. Every writer can improve, even Stephen King. I'm not going to go into a huge long monologue about SK, but if you see areas of possible improvement, by all means, do it!

    I love the story. When I read it the first time, I didn't review but I figured better late than never.


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  • From SlackerBitch on July 23, 2008
    I'm not sure a re-write is absolutely necessary. I really liked your characters, the dialouge, and the story in general, your description is great, but I really didn't like Lanie hooking up with Ryan after the entire Mel incident thing. . . it didn't sit well with me, but that's not my perogative, your story was just fine and had a Thelma and Louise kick to it at the end. I enjoyed the story, but it was short and kind of fell through your fingers because of the casms in the chapters; I think if you wanted you could fill it in more, but it's not totally necessary because your story is very, very good.
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  • From DeathxByxTrend on July 20, 2007
    Hey, I really loved this.

    I read some of the sequel too.

    It's Great !

    : )
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  • From Phreakdom on March 26, 2007
    Fucking amazing! I'm so glad you stuck with this and finished it. I really enjoyed it! I'll be sure to keep an eye out for a sequel.
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  • From Mordeo on March 26, 2007
    My God... this is beautiful, and it's actually really, extremely creepy how much this paralells my life. Had I read this two years ago, I'd be having a heart attack right now. Sequel? Yes please. I need to know what happens to everyone.
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  • From Eliza650 on March 24, 2007
    Wow, you are so talented. I've followed this since the beginning, and I love it all the way through. The way you write your OC is awesome. She's not two-dimensional at all, in fact I almost feel like I know her or something.

    The ending here was great, with Lainee taking off and changing her name and everything. If you wrote a sequel, I think it would kick serious ass. I'll keep my fingers crossed for it!
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  • From on March 22, 2007
    OMG that story was fucking awsome :) :) plz update :) gah ill soo give u a cookie if u do :)
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  • From Phreakdom on March 18, 2007
    You should totally write a sequel. I'd be interested to see where you go with it, what kind of drama awaits the girls.
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  • From ToShyToSpeak on January 31, 2007
    Owch,
    “That a girl like you has to waste away, for the sake of high school fame.”
    Talk about burnage..
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  • From silk on January 30, 2007
    I love Frank in this story! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2006
    I absolutely love it. I can't wait till you write more.
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  • From ANON - erin on November 22, 2006
    oooooh! cliff hanger much? i love it, can't wait for the next chapter.
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