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Reviews for The Moon and the Sun

By : soleil
  • From ANON - mizu on October 17, 2006
    yay you updated!^^ your fanfiction is just too exciting!^.^ but i am very sad that for the first time i have some critique... i don't want to have any.. but i kind of don't like the new chapter (new chapter 8)not that much as i liked the others. please don't get me wrong and don't take it too serious because your style is still wonderfull and the storyline just great but the chapter just doesn't make sense to me.. i love your idea of közis and manas relationship (it is just too funny because my friend an me once joked about malice mizer (we love to do that with jrockers but especially malice) and their relationships and we had the same opinion about mana and közi as you!(my friend even wrote a really short "anti-fanfiction"(
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  • From ANON - Aya on October 16, 2006
    YAY! You updated! I'm so excited! WAH! So good, like last time! *huggles back* YAY! This is so wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mashou No Tenshi.. on October 15, 2006
    hi ^^
    I really really REALLY like you'r fic it's awesome.
    I like everything the way that you make Mana and Gackt act it's soooo good
    weel I can't write much because I speak in spanish so n.nU
    but really I love this fic n.n
    I hope read more soon, I can't wait
    bye bye ^o^
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  • From ANON - Stevie on October 13, 2006
    This has got me all hot and flustered! You have the greatest sense of humor and you know exactly when to use it. I absolutely love your writing style. This story is just so realistic in such a sarcastic way.. I LOVE it. If you don't continue writing it, I may cease to live.
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  • From ANON - mizu on October 12, 2006
    hey!
    thanks for the 9th chapter! i was really happy to read it so soon! but i didn't meant to rush you with my words from my last review! take your time!! it is just so exciting^^ but even if you say that you had a bad day; that didn't effect your writing! this chapter again is very beautyfull! i really enjoy reading^^i just can keep on repeating that. keep on and i am already looking very forward to the new chapter! (but please no rape-.-)
    greets! mizu
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  • From ANON - Aya on October 11, 2006
    Amazing! Who knew having a bad day could make you write like that? I loved this chapter, it was as wonderful as always, and I'm so glad you didn't make us wait so long for this one. Not that I mind the wait if you're writing this wonderfully though. Anyways, keep up the good work and if you ever need someone to talk to just let me know yes? I can listen pretty well if you need to talk it out. Anyways, keep on writing and I will keep on reviewing/reading.
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  • From ANON - Gubblegum on October 11, 2006
    T__T
    such an amazing story!
    seriously, its awesome!
    all that it needs now to make it complete is for mana to get raped...
    ahem! *beats self* bad fangirl!
    *wanders off rubbing her forehead and muttering about goats*
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  • From ANON - mizu on October 08, 2006
    hi, this is the anonymos person who reviewed your story one time before^^
    it was really hard for me to wait for the eight chapter. i am so eager to go on reading! your story is really like a good book! i get sad when i'm thinking about that the story will end. then you have to write a new one with that pairing^^
    i had to laugh often in the eight chapter. i think you brought the personalitys of the characters out vey very well! i just can picture them acting like that. especially mana! your work is really great! közi as the "occasional lover" was my favourit^^ (and i just could see it clear before my eyes how mana was going to explode as gackt appeard suddenly and talked with közi)
    please keep going with the deepness of the characters and the sometimes funny scenes. i am enjoying reading this fanfiction and i have a very serious opinion against fanfiction^^
    greets
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  • From ANON - Aya on October 08, 2006
    Absolutely amazing! The depth of Gackt and Mana is amazing! They aren't one-dimensional and flat like a lot of stories make them out to be! And I can totally see Mana acting like he is in you're story. Wonderful as usual, I wouldn't expect anything less. Please keep up the good work! You're fiction is one of the best I have ever read with this pairing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2006
    hello!

    i like your story very much!!!
    it is really exciting! i am not much into fanfiction but yours is a big exeption!
    your writing style is very beautyfull und pleasant to read.
    everytime i have finished a chapter, i am almost dying to wait for the new one!
    so please keep writing on this fanfiction and don't turn it down!!
    it is really good!

    greets
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  • From ANON - Aya on October 03, 2006
    You're story is absolutely amazing, the characters are deep and meaningful and I absolutely adore the way you're portrayed Mana. Keep up the amazing work!
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