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Reviews for Aberrance

By : MementoxMori
  • From ANON - xxDizzyxx on May 12, 2008
    FINALLY.
    KYO IS ACTING LIKE A MAN AND NOT A DEADBEAT DAD.

    i can't WAIT to see the shit hit the fan with Hitomi that slut. I'm so excited i can hardly sit still just THINKING of how Kyo is going to blow up on that garbage woman.

    that's what you get kyo, when you date a slut like her...i hate to say i told you so but..."i told you so."

    now that i've thoroughly pissed kyo off, i'll run away now. LOL
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  • From ANON - Firework on April 27, 2008
    I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw another chapter! *Dances around*
    Though I still find myself so frustrated, God damn I just want to bang Jae and Kyo's heads together now! It's slowly but surely sending me mad. That said though you do have a fantastic way of building and expressing emotions in your writing.
    Can't wait to see some more, rather sooner that later I hope! :P
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  • From ANON - xxDizzyxx on April 20, 2008
    The last line describes this chapter perfectly. POOR JAE. I just feel bad for everyone. Kaoru's trying so hard but he can't really make her feel better...even with that AMAZING SEX.

    God it was so...desperate. This was the perfect time for a scene like that, because it really conveyed how Jae was feeling and the way her life is going better than words. So much push and pull trying to get what she wants, and still not getting it.
    I'm glad she has someone in her life like Axel who can be there for her and not make her feel ashamed for being vulnerable too. I also love how you put the song in there. That song is PERFECT for this chapter. Davey just knows how to speak about lonliness. *sigh* I listening to the song while i read the chapter, and it was like perfect timing. Actually that whole cd, Decemberunderground, is like the perfect soundtrack for this story. I'm glad Jae got her Kiss and Control from Kaoru, but i think its gonna complicate things for them, especially if kyo finds out!
    I need to go read it again...

    And KYO NEEDS TO GET IT TOGETHER. GOD. Nothing could be worse than them not talking, even if they were fighting. He just needs to man up and go see his damn kid. DEAD BEAT DAD.

    update SOON!

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  • From xHatakexTanyarix on April 14, 2008
    Great update!! I was al excited when I saw that this was posted xD This definitely made my mood better, seeing as some chick on this one forum accused Kyo of plagiarizing his lyrics >
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  • From on February 25, 2008
    I absolutely love the story! Your writing style is so great; the way you describe emotions and situations. Amazing. You even made me cry.
    You describe the feelings of Tristan so well, too. It kind of reminds me of my own expierences.
    And God, I really hate that Hitomi girl. ;p
    Well, I am really looking forward to an update! :)

    - Toxick
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  • From ANON - xxDizzyxx on December 26, 2007
    I LOVE IT. SO sad.

    Stupid Kyo. GET YOUR FUCKING SHIT TOGETHER ALREADY!!!

    the lyrical timing was perfect, this chapter really was poetry.

    damn you kyo.
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  • From ANON - Firework on December 24, 2007
    Ok I was so excited to see an update!
    The thing is you made me cry, poor kid. I love how this is unfolding slowly even if it is torture.
    I think your writing has a fantastic natural pace to it never once seeming rushed.
    Can't wait to read more!
    And if appropriate, Merry Christmas
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  • From ANON - Dark Avenger on December 02, 2007
    So sad... I wish he'd found the doctors card and found out she's a lying bitch... but later, I guess. Maybe that'll force his hand toward not being an ass to Jae... who knows.
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  • From xHatakexTanyarix on December 02, 2007
    Amazing chapter! I love your writing style, and I was soooooo excited when I saw you updated! XD Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Firework on December 02, 2007
    At last! *Flails*
    Now you've got me paying attention again I want more!
    Oooh... its getting so interesting too

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  • From xHatakexTanyarix on October 31, 2007
    I read this over and over, and I still cry!!!! :( I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 29, 2007
    Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Firework on October 01, 2007
    *Sits and cuddles Tristan*

    I feel so sorry for the poor kid, even more so now!
    It still seems things are going to get worse before they get better. I'm just wondering now what Tristan is going to be like when he see's Kyo next. I'm beginning to think it's not going to be Kyo's response we're going to have to worry about.
    The kid certainly has a backbone.
    I'm loving every second of this, I can't wait to see where it goes next!
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  • From ANON - Dark Avenger on October 01, 2007
    Thank you for sending me the update for this! ^__^

    I can't remember... have I invited you to be a guest author on my site or not? If not, here's the invitation. Will you be a guest author on my site? http://www.cadkitten.com Let me know either way, yes or no. If yes, please send me an email with your birthdate in it and I'll set you up with all the necessary info. ^__^

    ~Dark Avenger
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  • From ANON - kaoruslilvamp on September 30, 2007
    I hope Kyo steps up and quits being an ass lol. Great chapter! I wonder what Jae will do when Kaoru talks to her in the morning?!?! Hope another chappy is coming soon, take care!
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