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Reviews for The Vampire Queen

By : addykins1989
  • From SimplexMinded on February 09, 2012
    This story is soooo awesome! I'm new to this site so it took me a while to figure out how to review but i've read all 7 chapters and it is sooooooo good! Please don't stop!
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  • From Kittynater on January 06, 2012
    I love it so far! Please write more soon!
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  • From DracoAddendum on August 15, 2008
    I truly adore this story and I hope very much that there are more chapters to come! It has a great plot and is very well written. Kudos!
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  • From Algaechild on April 01, 2008
    Awww...Gerard is so cute. I like it!
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  • From Tya on November 23, 2007
    I really really love this story, and now I really want biscuits and gravy, but besides that great job. I would suggest finding a beta and adding just a bit more filler into the story. If you're a fast reader like me it tends to fly by really quickly. Try describing the room(s) and the setting as well as the people? It might help to set the mood with weather or lighting, it would really be need to get a feel for this underground world of theirs. Is it all stone and earth? or is it a castle underground? That sort of thing. Just some suggestions, you don't have to listen to them but from one sister to another^^ *hugs* love ya and talk to you later!
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