Reviews for Blackmailing Emma Watson

BY : ArcherNexus


  • From ArcherNexus on July 10, 2018

    Thanks for the comments everyone, glad you enjoy it. 

     

    @Mal

    That means a lot coming from you, thank you very much. I know my descriptions of Emma's actions need work, stuff like that has always been my weak spot. As a modder (Fallout games), I'm a lot more used to writing dialogues.

    And I agree that the blackmail material is a bit of a stretch, but I feel like the reactions of real people in literotica almost always require suspension of belief. And Emma seems like a really proud woman, I think that the risk of having a hardcore sex tape go public would affect her more than it would most other celebs. I tried my best to show how much the mere thought of it terrifies and sickens her. For me, that's enough to make it somewhat believable, although in reality something like this would almost certainly result in her immediately calling the cops.

    I'd really love to hear your thoughts on the third chapter, because that's where it gets really fun. Maybe not so much for Emma.



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  • From Mal on July 10, 2018

    Hello ArcherNexus,

    I've now read the first two chapters of this story, and overall I find it to be quite enjoyable.

    Although I find the material used to blackmail Emma a little implausible, (i.e. I think it would take something far worse than that to put her into such a desperate state that she would give into Sean's demands), I don't find it so far out of bounds as to deny my ability to suspend disblief that this was happening.

    By far my favorite element of the story is hearing Emma's internal thoughts as she is put through the ringer by a man she finds disgusting. Your actual description of the acts she's performing, (i.e. the blowjobs or the sex), could maybe be a little more robust, but hearing Emma's internal monologue is more than hot enough to make up for it.

    I'm very curious to see where you push her to from here, what your protagonist gets her to do and how much resistance she puts up. I'm also curiuos to see if he pushes her too far and maybe she just ends up calling the cops, (probably what she should have done from the begginning...)

    Anyway, the story is very enjoyable! Good Job and keep em coming!



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  • From LincolnJohnson on July 08, 2018

    Brutal and interesting. Keep it up.



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  • From Gold4sun on April 14, 2018

    Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Very hot blowjob and wonder what else Sean has planned for Emma.



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  • From SailorNemesis on April 14, 2018

    Looking forward to Emma learning to swallow. And getting pregnant.



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