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Reviews for Kinyoubi no Koibito

By : matchakitty
  • From ANON - J on August 14, 2006
    Despite what that one user said, I've found that I rather like your story. Even if they don't think that so and so wouldn't be a couple, its up to you as a fanfic writer to decide who you want to be that way and so on. :) Now then, I've been loving this story forever and I've been wondering if you'll ever be continuing it or if you *have* completed it and it's posted someplace other than the Alpha Male Archive. I doubt I'll get a reply but it doesn't hurt to try. ^^
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  • From on September 24, 2004
    The plot was severely lacking and ALL band members were out of character--Yuki wao muo much of a sissy. Sakito was referred to as a kid in comparison to Yuki, when in fact Sakito is OLDER than Yuki (by five years!)...Miyabi was the only member of Dlq NOT older than the members of Raphael who were all born in 1981; Sakito was born in 1976.

    Do a bit of research. You should really know what you are talking about before you start writing a fanfic... especially one that involves real people.

    Besides...Sakito and Yuki would make a crappy couple; Yuki and Kikasa...much better and actually believable.

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