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Reviews for At the Peak of Innocence

By : Rayvin813
  • From ANON - Janine on December 21, 2004
    help, what's happened, half the story's missing.
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  • From ANON - Emma on May 10, 2004
    This was great! So sexy! You should write more fics about Johnny/Orlando! ;)
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  • From ANON - Inge on April 16, 2004
    Lovely, lovely!
    Who wouldn't want to lurk in the shadows?
    Wonderful to let Johnny keep some of that eyeliner - he does look great with it, doesn't he?
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  • From starbuck on January 11, 2004
    Wow. This was beautifuery ery hot without the usual jarring graphic details. I thought everything felt natural here, and the sense of lust flowed throughout the entire story, beginning to end. More erotica than porn, if that makes sense at all. Someone mentioned in an earlier review their dislike of the term "elder" in reference to Depp. Personally, I thought it (and your descriptions of laugh lines) added a lot to the tangible beauty of the scene. Also loved the mention of his voice- the southern thang. ;D Very nice!
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls on October 25, 2003
    *fans face* I think I need a cold shower after that, tee hee...*very* impressive. I love RPS. And Orli and Johnny together...*drools*
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  • From ANON - Usagi on October 17, 2003
    Wonderful! You really know how to write. Everything flowed so smoothly, and it was just incredible overall.
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  • From ANON - Rory on September 25, 2003
    HUZZAH FOR JOHNNY'S HIGH SPERM-COUNT!
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  • From ANON - Brandi on August 17, 2003
    your story was really going good man, but the whole elder thing kinda killed it :( which is sad cuz i really wanted to finish reading but i kept getting mental pictures of an old man! you have and awsome way of wording sttho tho so thats cool.
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