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Reviews for Falling Stars

By : johnnysgirl
  • From ANON - Kemikal Ex on January 30, 2004
    Hmm... I've a question... Why is it that in *every* Actor/OFC kind of fic, the author seems to wax poetical on every descriotion of the female cctercter? "She really was lovely. Her apricot colored hair was short and casual, stray pieces falling haphazardly into her face." Of course. I think like that, in those terms, at every chance. And I'm sure men all over, famous or no, always hae time for wonderfully poetic descriptions in the 7-second span between thoughts of sex.

    "I returned my attention to the girl, Finn, who was smiling.
    There was something about that smile.
    It was so pure, so innocent…such soft, fragile, untouched lips.
    Kissable…
    I complemented that smile, only to be greeted with a politely puzzled expression."

    Eek. That's all there is to it... eek.

    And WHY is every OFC *perfect*? Or, in contrast, entirely too screwed up for their own good, which, of course, envokes sypathy and pathetic *love* from whatever character... *ahem* WHY? "She was pretty…petite, perfectly proportioned, and had a lovely smile to boot." Perfectly porportioned. Because, as we all know, every chance encounter people have is with perfectly porportioned, beautiful people...

    Oi, a little realism would be appreciated. Accepting, of course, this is FICTION and all, it has room to be realistic...

    However, the fic wine.ine. Finn seemed like an interesting character, even if she was *perfect*. Johnny's character seemed... to slip, a bit. *shrugs* Perhaps I'm out of the know and it is widely accepted that celebrity's go home with obnoxious Irish strangers and immediately fall for their *perfect* realitives... Eek.
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  • From ANON - Lilly on January 27, 2004
    pun?
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  • From ANON - CaptainJacklova4eva on January 24, 2004
    A very interesting story. Please write more!
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  • From ANON - SesshoumarusMistress on January 10, 2004
    Really good story! But you're right... I am going to come after you with a pitchfork and torch!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Damnnnn Johnny Depp is so incredibly hot.
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  • From ANON - C.J. Davis on January 05, 2004
    Please tell me you have more to this? I tht tht this was a very well written real person fic. I am thoroughly enjoying it. Please update soon!

    C.J.
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  • From ANON - Roux on November 11, 2003
    Damn you!!!!! ARGH!!! I want somethin' down and dirty to happen! No more cliffies, darnit!!!!! Hmph.......

    Mmmmmmmmm........Johnny is so sweet and sexy when torn......
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  • From ANON - Teek on November 09, 2003
    Okay, normally I woulde a e a long review on this, but I really have no words. None. I'm just... Gah. *stomps feet in a shrieking frenzy* how could you leave it there!? *screams and goes back to re-read* I want a Johnny snow globe. *giggles* I'll review again when I pro properly think, so until then!

    Teek
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  • From ANON - Teek on November 07, 2003
    I reviewed once before, and was just checking through my links -this is a daily thing, mind you- for updates, when the caffine wore off and I need to laugh or fall asleep. So, knowing that Willy's antics had made me laugh the f tim time I read it, I decided I might as well do it again. And I did. Laughed so hard my chair fell over. I'm so in love with this fic. Believe it or not, you've put an idea in my head for my first actor/OFC fic (where as I am a born slasher, and would rather write something along the lines of Johnny/Orlando *whistles innocently, refusing to acknowledge the fact that she has in fact started a J/O fic*) and it's not wanting to leave. So I'm going to hash out a plot, being as what's in my head is just pure smut right now, and hopefully start on it.

    I can't wait for you to update. I have a feeling I'll fall even more in love with 'Falling Stars', and will be forever addicted. It's like chocolate, or coffee; once you get the first bite/sip, it's damn near impossible to stop. More? Please? Pretty please? *tries to pout convincingly, but it doesn't work very well, and upon looking at self in mirror, decides it looks more like she's either in pain, or constipated, rather than pouting* I could so not be an actress. *slumps into chair and picks up coffee cup* Damn. Forgot this was empty. *sigh* Okay, have rambled enough. Just thought I'd beg for more as soon as possible. And btw: the gaelic and heavy accents, are they coming straight from your head (and dictionary, I'd assume), or is it from personal relations? I would think the second, because it's extremely fluent, and perfect, really, and doens't feel like it's come from a dictionary and such. *shrugs* I don't care where it's coming from, I love it. Keep up the great work. *huggles*

    Until the next chapter(s)!
    Teek
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  • From ANON - Teek on November 04, 2003
    I'm normally not into actor/OC, but since I started reading Johnny fics *hums innocently*... I can't seem to get enough of him, regardless of the situation or pairing, and finding fics that he's written so well in -and that all the other characters are as well- it's great.

    You've got me hooked on 'Falling Stars' tho'. I just adore Finn (I wouldn't want to grow up with 'Niantiti' for a name either, despite it being really very nice *grins*), and her family? ye Gods! I was laughing so hard when Johnny and Willy were sitting on the stairs. Just the thought of him tryio deo decifer what's being said, it's wonderful. You portray everyone as normal, which I find most authors have a hard time with. Trying not to make the actor/actress seem too 'up there' and to make the OCs and the situations as if they've really happened, or are happening. Major points for that.

    I'll definitely be keeping ye oye on this story, so please, update soon!

    *goes back and re-reads, because 's j's just fallen in love with Willy and Maggie*
    Teek
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  • From ANON - Roux on October 26, 2003
    LOL! Puns are ALWAYS appreciated by yours truly...

    I like your start; it's funny, and it flows well. Being an Irish girl myself, it was funny to see how alike your story's grandparents and my own, real grandparents are. Spooky, really...And who can resist Johnny's smile?

    Update soon!

    Happy Writings!

    Roux
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  • From ANON - Roux on October 26, 2003
    LOL! Puns are ALWAYS appreciated by yours truly...

    I like your start; it's funny, and it flows well. Being an Irish girl myself, it was funny to see how alike your story's grandparents and my own, real grandparents are. Spooky, really...And who can resist Johnny's smile?

    Update soon!

    Happy Writings!

    Roux
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