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Reviews for Arranged Melancholia

By : Seductress
  • From ANON - Aya on September 13, 2006
    OH YAY!
    That was my first thought when I saw that you were picking up this story again. Im srry that you were having hard times, I know how that is, but I'm REALLY excited to have this story back. I never thought id see a new chapter for it! Its amazing, and I cant wait to see where it's going!!
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  • From ANON - LeX on June 28, 2004
    Oh cool story line ;) I hope you add more to it soon.


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  • From gypsyqueen on April 24, 2004
    Darling, I was hooked the moment I read your introductory paragraph. The story-line is awesome, and the idea behind it is breathtaking. The moment you said a masculine female could impregnate a feminine male, I was all over it. I thought that particularly hillarious, at any rate.

    I wonder what would make them feminine or masculine, because it wouldn't just be in the appearance, obviously. With the men, it could be the argument... the masculine is the one who tops, but then there are women... Hmm... You're brilliant if you can make me ponder something in a review, just so you know. *g*

    Aww, well. Constructive criticism time. I wish you could bulk up the chapters a little more, but you are probably like me and you don't have the time to sit and writie fanfictions all day. Also, if you would hit enter twice when you go to the next paragraph it would be more aesthetically pleasing, and easier to read for us who don't want to get off of our asses to go get glasglasses. (Didn't mean to make like Dr. Suess, there. It happens naturally.)

    Anyway, keep up the writing. It's a wonderful story.

    ~*GypsyQueen*~
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  • From ANON - Aldawen on March 15, 2004
    *claps*

    Another wonderful chapter from a wonderful writer. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Tana on December 10, 2003
    very good chapter, could you please write more soon i wana know what happends really bad.
    Love Tana
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  • From ANON - Mike on December 06, 2003
    awh!
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  • From LindaG on August 07, 2003
    Unfortunately, the treatment in chapter 9 doesn't surprise me. I hope you continue this soon, because someone needs to save Darren from that bastard.
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  • From LindaG on August 07, 2003
    Chapter 8 - Aww.. Poor boys. I *hope* things are going to go well. This seems to forbode something bad, though.
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  • From ANON - LindaG on August 07, 2003
    I am so sorry I haven't reviewed in SO long. Chapter 7 was very sweet. I loved it. I hope things don't go too badly for Darren when he ends up pregnant.
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  • From ANON - Alaura on July 27, 2003
    I adore period pieces so I was greatly excited to read this. Hopefully your chapters will become longer but I really am enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - Tana on May 08, 2003
    Keri I love this chapter please please add more Please lol

    Love
    Tana
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  • From ANON - mike on April 06, 2003
    mmm. hot direct and to-the-point this chapter huh? *pleads for more*
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  • From ANON - LindaG on April 06, 2003
    What a sweet love scene in the barn.
    Poor Darren. What will happen if he becomes pregnant now?
    I hope you update this soon.
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  • From ANON - Savage Rose on April 05, 2003
    *pouts* I was hoping for a new update (since this story has finally returned to the 1st page) but I didnt find any new chapter :P

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  • From ANON - Nick on January 22, 2003
    I love your book so far i really like to see you so into things other then THE SIMS. lol. Keep up the good work. I love you.
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