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Reviews for Dark Heart

By : Bells
  • From ANON - Just.Us.Strange.Things. on July 13, 2006
    I love your writing style, I could barely take my eyes off the sceen. This Fan-Fic is wonderful-I love everything about it. Please hurry with the next one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2005
    Possibly the best facfic i've ever read?
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mistylesca on August 19, 2005
    Ah! What a wonderful story! I would definately encourage you to write some more Gorillaz, you're so good at it! Great job on the characterization. :D
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  • From ANON - Azadeh on July 14, 2005
    I like this chapter! Very good!!
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  • From ANON - deepka on June 08, 2005
    When we will get a next chapter?
    I can't wait! =))))
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on May 12, 2005
    Hmmm, okay. I think this fic would benefit from an AU label. You have changed the characters SO MUCH. I'm not sure what changing their backgrounds would really provide to the story... the changed backgrounds have no real significance and it seems to suggest more that you didn't know what they were and just decided to "change" them for your fic - ie make them up. Additionally, Murdoc and 2-D are REALLY out of character here, it seems like you've done a role-reversal on them. 2-D is masochistic? The boy is addicted to painkillers in an effort to get rid of simple headaches! And Murdoc, the last person I think he'd show a sensitive side to is 2-D.

    Don't get me wrong, this fic is great, it just doesn't seem to fit with canon at all. I'm not saying this to insult you, I'm just saying that to me -- and other fans I showed your fic to -- you changed the characters so much that they weren't even the Gorillaz anymore. The story and writing is good. It's just those few things that REALLY detracted from it.

    Actually, if you went through and switched every time you typed "Murdoc" to "2-D" and vice versa, and took out the pointless change in backgrounds, everything would be fine again. Then this fic would deserve the 5 stars it's been rated. Otherwise, this should be marked as an AU, since it's deviated so much from canon.
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  • From ANON - Me on May 11, 2005
    Awwww! One of the most touching things I've ever read...just don't use 2d next time...:(
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  • From ANON - miku on May 08, 2005
    This was amaising! Thankyou so much for writing this!!! xxx
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  • From ANON - amr on May 07, 2005
    Keep it up. great work. Hope to see more soon!
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  • From Yamima on May 02, 2005
    WOW Nicely done!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on May 13, 2004
    Hey! Loved the fic. I loved the cute little power plays Murdoc had with 2D. And it's nice to see 2D portreyed as something more than the vapid moron he looks. I knew he had hidden depths. I'm not into the s/m aspect of the fic, but I'll deal. You can't read a Murdoc/2D fic without the s/m, because that is so much a part of their whacked out relationship. ::pauses:: Well, I can deal as long as it doesn't go graphic. I can't read graphic s/m, it's just sick. But, anyways, I loved the way at the end 2D is being all nuce and caring.

    Anh, hey, I wanna know what happens next! Write us a nice romanticy sequel. Murdoc so deserves some kindness and love.
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  • From ANON - . on January 05, 2004
    Its a wonderful story, strange , however that makes it all the better. I feel that you should keep this story going, not only because i liked it but because you opened up so many questions and possiblities that it would just really be a shame to leave them alone and not explore them in later chapters. Keep up the good writing, im sure i`ll enjoy reading your other works as well.
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  • From ANON - varenoea on October 20, 2003
    Whoah, part 6 is up! Yippieh! I was so anticipated for it that I already e a e a 6- pages- long continuation myself and was jsut about to ask you whether I could upload it here in your tradition... but that´s unnecessary now. Anyway, I´m off to read it...
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  • From ANON - slashhammer64 on September 19, 2003
    this is the best gorillaz story i've ever read. for once 2D isn't a whiny little pussy and there is actual depth in the writing. please continue this!
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  • From ANON - purplemoon16 on June 26, 2003
    Aiii, usually I never read stories like this, but I decided to since there's only two Gorillaz fics up. I like the "stronger" (he is, in some ways) 2-D; you never see any fics like that. I love how you tell the story from Muds POV - you make it work extremelly well. ^_^" Just one thing - I noticed on ch. 3 (I think it was): "Hentais" should be spelled "hentai". When you translate any Japanese word over, it is the same both singular or pularized. One hentai, five hentai: ahhh, scary!! XD Anyhow, I love this story! ^___^Y
    -fahsky-
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