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Reviews for Breaking Through

By : gardenrose
  • From ANON - safire_slash on September 08, 2005
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahkkkk! are you continuing this?! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, i'll beg if i have to!
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  • From ANON - Alias on August 24, 2005
    A very nice little story you have going here! I'm not sure how I managed to even find this site last night but I figured what the hell and started reading this fic. I read 3 chapters last night and spent 5 hours this morning reading the rest of it and am thoroughly thrilled! I am particularily rather fond of Mr Jones and so desperately found myself feeling for him in your writing. However, after reading the reviews, I must say thank gawd I saw this after 31 chapters because I think I would have lost interest after two and a half years of waiting. ;) Please don't keep it going for another two and a half years!


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  • From ANON - akasting2002 on August 03, 2005
    it was a great update, hun. can't wait to see what happened next time. and please - more R rated scene ^__~
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  • From ANON - Ashra on June 10, 2005
    Nice story you've got goin' here! I love the way you've made them act, the problems that they have, and all that stuff! I really hope you update soon! Laterz!
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  • From ANON - Delilah on May 12, 2005
    this story is excellent!!! I love it!! Can't wait for you to finish it.......
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  • From ANON - Heather on April 19, 2005
    I realize that your intention was sex in excess but I think that it's perhaps a little bit too much. The story seems to get stuck in a few places near the beginning. After a while it starts moving again but I think if you toned it down it would be better. Too late to change now I guess. But I do believe that some sex was necessary.

    I also cried at the end of chapter 28 (part 30?). I'm dying to find out what happens next. Please continue. :)
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  • From ANON - 10minutesinaroom on January 28, 2005
    This is the most credible story I've read. Even though I don't know the guys, I can't help wondering "Was she eavesdropping on their intimate moments?"

    You've done a bang-up job of exploring a very likely stormy scenario between these two! It really leaves me with few words to say how intensely this story moves me.

    Really looking forward to more!

    10minutes
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  • From ANON - vkr on December 05, 2004
    another great chapter. can't wait to see next
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  • From ANON - akasting2002 on December 24, 2003
    FINALLY! THANK YOY FOR UPDATE. YOU DID GREAT STORY
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  • From ANON - LindaG on May 21, 2003
    Interesting twist you have here. Daniel friends with a Drag Queen.
    And Darren drinking a beer? *lol*... a first to be remembered, I think...
    I enjoyed this chapter a lot.
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  • From ANON - LindaG on May 09, 2003
    Sad, but romantically sweet chapter. Very good story.
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  • From ANON - Linus on April 19, 2003
    Shit, this is a good story!
    I really love it. It's really sensual and sexy and beautiful and heart breaking.
    And you tease! Left it there...

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  • From ANON - LindaG on April 16, 2003
    Well, I'd certainly like to kill Elena, I know that.
    I hope something pleasant happens sometime in this story.
    All this paStarStarting to get depressing.
    Pretty well written, though.
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  • From ANON - LindaG on April 10, 2003
    Very good chapter.
    I don't understand Darren's pain very well, either. I hope it will all be revealed at some point. Hopefully before it tears Daniel apart.
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  • From ANON - LindaG on April 03, 2003
    Great chapter. Wow.. Sizzling in the bedroom, I must say. Great job.
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