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Reviews for Breaking Through

By : gardenrose
  • From ANON - Ilze on February 27, 2003
    Sorry, those 2 quotes werHis His eyes are speaking volumes, Daniel thought… >

    and


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  • From ANON - Ilze on February 27, 2003
    Hey...

    Just my reflections after reading your story...
    Exacting and dainty reader (as me, lol) needs something more than neat plot, D&D and sex for a good story. He/she needs subtle language, impressive way of expression.
    What I wanted to say? I like your style. You know, I just... sometimes I read and... wow, there's such a briliant sentence. For example,



    or

    One may say, it's nothing, just sentences. But somehow... they enrich your story. It's a pleasure to read.

    Hope you understood, what I tried to say. Jus' wanted to say it :) Hope you write more. Good luck!


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  • From LindaG on February 25, 2003
    Wow. This chapter was pretty darn not. There were a couple of places where I think you mixed up their names, but this chapter was still intense.
    And Daniel. He seems to be giving Darren what the Diva needs, but from his tears in the shower, I'm not sure he's getting what he needs.
    Please write more soon.
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  • From LindaG on February 25, 2003
    Interesting chapter. Sexy. A bit strange. It's nice to see Darren happy? At least I think he is.
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  • From ANON - dazzy on February 24, 2003
    Really good story! Please, update soon!
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  • From LindaG on February 22, 2003
    The sadness and confusion in chapter 4 is very nearly heart stopping. I feel so bad for the boys.
    And Daniel basically raping Darren in the shower. Brought tears to my eyes.
    I can't wait until you update again.
    Very good story. I love it.
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  • From LindaG on February 22, 2003
    I simply loved chapter 3 it was SO sweet. It started out sadly, yes, but you brought them back together and made it sweet and sexy.
    Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - Pomona on February 22, 2003
    Hee..ee... you're good. You're really, *really* good at this. It's all pain mixing with pleasure and that's EXACTLY how it should be. Great job!
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  • From LindaG on February 20, 2003
    Interesting beginning. I already hate their manager. :P
    I am looking ard ard to the next chapter to see where you take this story.
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