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Reviews for The War (In The Beginning)

By : pensfan100
  • From AhaydenS on July 15, 2020

    Wow. Just wow. I was watching some Anidala vids on YouTube when I saw in the comments where someone said that Hayden and Natalie would have made a great couple. Naturally, I Googled for fanfics and this is one of the top results - and I can see why; I created a log-in just so I can say how good it is. How long before she says she loves him? Does she break up with Michael? I really hope you come back to this story!


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  • From ANON - randomangel22 on January 14, 2006
    please update soon!!!!!!! i love this story and a oh-so-dark hayden!!!!!! i can't to find out what move he's going to make to win natalie. hurry please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2006
    Amazing story. I'd love to read more. Please update
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  • From ANON - akemi on December 24, 2005
    i really love your story so far - i hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - cowtossing on December 21, 2005
    What a spectacular read! I don't usually go for this couple but it was so beautifully written, including the very descriptive sexual scenes; very enjoyable ;)

    I cannot wait to see more additions to a such a piece of work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2005
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ! please update !!
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  • From ANON - Hayde&NatLuver119 on October 12, 2005
    omg damn this is so hot! Please update!
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  • From ANON - T-BONE on October 10, 2005
    OH DAMN THAT WAS HOTT !!! CONTINUE !! PLEASE !!
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  • From ANON - amyamy42 on October 10, 2005
    omg!!!! more!!! please!!! this is a great story!!! please continue as soon as you can!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - T-BONE on October 08, 2005
    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING !!! I can't say anything else but... PERFECT !! it would be even more perfect if you would update YSCCD !!
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  • From ANON - Stag on October 06, 2005
    Loving the build up to the confession. It's really hot. Well, maybe its cuz Hayden is hot. Hm...
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  • From ANON - Caz on October 05, 2005
    Hells Bells, Bonnie, I DARE you to get the next chapter even better than that one. Superb!
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  • From ANON - Stag on October 05, 2005
    AN UPDATE! *tears* It's been a long time!MORE!...please

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  • From ANON - ilovestarwars220 on October 03, 2005
    omg!!! it's been about a week since i've read ALL your stories!! They are all so perfect and wonderful and.. words can't explain about how much of a great writer you are!!!! Please update soon, i would REALLY love to read more!!
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  • From ANON - ME on October 02, 2005
    I love it so much!! Thank you for updating!! Please update soon!! PLEASE!!
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