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Reviews for From This Moment on

By : ashleysfallenangel
  • From Mamacita on September 29, 2015
    I have to say, I think I know why no one's reviewed your story: IT'S TOO HARD TO READ! If you could break those giant one-paragraph chapters into multiple paragraphs, it would be easier to track. As it is, I figured I would check out the couple of chapters after you stopped bothering to break up the paragraphs, and then I quit reading because it's just too hard on your eyes. You might have a great story going here, but you're kind of shooting yourself in the foot--I'm thinking people aren't sticking with it long enough to find out that it's good because it's just too hard to look at. I notice others of your stories do tend to have very long paragraphs, but you don't see many out there where entire chapters are all just one block of text. Sorry, but I'm giving up!
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