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Reviews for Motel Dune (294 word ficlet)

By : Jeffree
  • From ANON - Inge on October 22, 2006
    Ah, wasn't that the sweetest?
    :-)
    Yes, certainly had a good laugh at the end !
    Cool !
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  • From ANON - orli\'s_girl on February 23, 2005
    o_O
    BARF
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  • From ANON - Gabby on February 12, 2005
    That was so very very wrong!
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  • From ANON - buggycas on February 11, 2005
    hehehehehehehehehehehehe I have no idea what possessed you to write this... but it's funny
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2005
    Not bad. You can write, but I think with some practice (and a good beta reader) you could be even better. Your story seem to lack in the development of characters and plot. Even ficlets should have strong character representation which is something you fall short in. Still, there weren't any major errors that I can see. Like I said, with more practice, your writing will mature. I look forward to seeing you inprove.

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - queen_of_mirkwood on January 27, 2005
    ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww

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  • From Jeffree on January 19, 2005
    Heh! Thanks doll, always the reaction I'm looking for ;p

    - Jeff
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  • From ANON - Ylith on January 18, 2005
    oohhh...you sick fucker. I loved that fic the first time I read it and I still love it now. cheers luv
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