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Reviews for Betrayal not wanted

By : DanSan
  • From ANON - Cloey Kujaku on May 05, 2005
    YOU UPDATED. YAY. I love the way you portray Kyo! My mind is filled with yummy images, now. Wai, you left off at such a good parrrt. PLEASE CONTINUE HELLA FUCKING SOON. T_T I NEED to see more Kyo torture! And Toshiya torture. (Raises hand.) I'll rape 'em any day. (Giggle.) ONEGAI! UPDATE SOOOOOON!
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  • From ANON - Cerbero on May 04, 2005
    This fic sucks. Actually, the hentai in which this is based on, sucks.
    And, by the way, stop writing this or else you will never get what you want.
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  • From ANON - Cloey Kujaku on April 13, 2005
    This story is so fucked up.

    And I LOVE it. XD


    So unique and interesting! Please continue. OH, KAORU SHOULD TOTALLY RAPE KYO. XD Yummyyyyy. I love uke!Kyo. And Toshiya torture! Yuuum. You rock, dear!
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  • From ANON - ... on March 30, 2005
    meh-heh...Kyo X Kaoru...hee hee.
    i LOVE you for writing this. Buuut...can you make
    Kyo and Kaoru get together real quick? I FEAR the
    warumono's life!!! ; __ ; I don't want him to be eaten
    by demons from the ninth layer of hell! NOOO! >__
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  • From keriihikaru on March 29, 2005
    Bible black ,right? Very Cool!! well written. I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - Lord on March 24, 2005
    Yup, now I found them..sorry, maybe I should have looked a bit closer..-__-..nja, interesting story I think, so keep on writing.
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  • From ANON - Lord on March 24, 2005
    hm...I have started to read, then flipped through the rest of the pages...and now I am wondering where you have hidden Dir en Grey?
    Or is this FF just wrong linked..-_-..strange.
    I had something like this before, the Fanfiction not matching the description.
    Could you help me please?
    Im confused..

    Lord
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2005
    Omg
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  • From ANON - Chuu on March 18, 2005
    Well having seen Black Bible before I can see exactly where you got all your stuff from...lol. But I like the jrock twist. :3
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  • From cresc on March 16, 2005
    Now make Kyo and Kao fuck.


    No, really, I like this fic.
    But you could make them fuck... Mostly because I'm afraid that Kyo-kun is a virgin and then Die will do something bad to him~ ;___;

    Kaoru-sama, save Kyo! Fuck him! Hard! On his bed! And on yours too! And in a bathtub! And on a table! And against the wall! In an elevator! Love Hotel! Public batroom! You must save the poor guy!


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  • From ANON - Jekkyl to Hyde on March 15, 2005
    :::GASP::: Kaoru cheating on Kyo with some Bimbo?!? [even thought they're
    not lovers yet...(^^;;)] ....::::::SOB,SOB:::::.....

    .......gomen if i get you angry. I know, its your fic,and you can do whatever you want.
    .....Please update soon?

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  • From ANON - Mae on March 05, 2005
    I'm just waiting until Ryu finally seducts Daisuke....-^_____^-
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2005
    YAY YOU UPDATED

    And yeah school sucks.

    Good chapter, continue iittt
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2005
    When're Kaoru and Kyo gonna come? ;~;

    Great chapter, by the way XD
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  • From ANON - Nani? on February 27, 2005
    You know what would be GREAT!?!?!? A 3 way between Yutaro,Keisuke, and masaki!! I've
    never seen that hentai, by the way. Must be good. Anyways, you could always pair Shinya with
    Die *poke poke*
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