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Reviews for Dance Without Sleeping

By : ChemicalMuse
  • From EPandAR4ever on April 29, 2008
    no matter how many times i read this i sitll end up crying befor i get to the end.
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  • From ANON - TB13 on December 25, 2006
    Another amazing story! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - ShaolinZelda on December 22, 2005
    OMG I dont remember the last time a fanfiction made me cry like this- I am not even joking, this made me bawl. This is such a beautiful fanfiction, i fucking love it.
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  • From CollisionStar on October 02, 2005
    I cried. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - BloodyBride on October 01, 2005
    That was so beautiful and sad. I cried. Scratch that, I WEPT.

    Normally character deaths make me angry. But this was so beautiful and so TRUE. The emotions, the way you wrote both the characters.

    The only shred of reality I have right now is that I saw MCR in concert last night...It was that believable and REAL.

    Your writing is powerful and beautiful.
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  • From ANON - JudasKiss on September 30, 2005
    Wow. Wow. ohmygod. Wow. I almost couldn't finish. I didn't want to. But I made myself. I wrote something similar to this once, but it wasn't as long or as powerful or as full of raw emotion. I think it has more meaning now. My girlfriend has a blood disorder that may one day kill her, and I thought about that about halfway through reading this. Up until then, it was sentimental and powerful but didn't quite hit home. That realization that I could very well be in this position one day just.... chilled me to the bone, I started shivering and I still haven't stopped. Ahhhh. Thank you for this. You've hit me over the head with a two-by-four, and I'm sincerly glad you did.
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  • From ANON - Kaytee on September 16, 2005
    That made me cry...
    It was powerful and meaningful.
    And I'm sobbing like a baby.
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  • From ANON - Fawkes on September 16, 2005
    wow. that was incredible! i'm not really a fan of fics that dwell too much on death but i thought i'd have a look anyway & boy am i glad i did. you truly write beautifully. i wish i had your gift. you had me in tears & all i can think is how beautiful you made the whole subject matter, not too dark as some tend to make it. please, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2005
    seriously...your fic made me cry...i'm not lying...i am an emotional person but...i don't know...thank you for writing this fic and letting people experience your talent

    >Celina
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  • From ANON - XxOnMyOwnxX on August 27, 2005
    That was the best story I have ever read in my entire life. It was so sad, I'm crying so much right now...That would be the most horrible feeling ever. The feeling that the one person whom you truly loved was gone forever, and it would only make it worse to know that you were the reason why he was gone. I wouldnt be able to live knowing I did that, I would break that promise, I wouldnt be able to keep it...It'd be too hard...

    Days would go by and I'd wonder why you werent near me at all.
    Days would go by and I cried, looking for strength for yet again another fall.
    We've always had eachother,
    And still my tears only dig deeper.
    I spent my days waiting to see your face again,
    And I hide it, so deep down, I still love you but I know you'll never return again.
    I laid in my bed, knowing I had hurt you again
    I lost my world and all I wanted then was my life to end.
    I remember your laugh, and your tears my shoulder held when they'd fall
    So I'm telling you this, while endless tears fall,
    And I'll try to believe that I don't even miss you at all...

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  • From ANON - Aelli-chan on August 10, 2005
    I wish that your stories A. weren't so amazingly good or B. weren't so sad/ mean to Gerard. In your stories he always seems to lose Frankie and gets hurt so deeply because of it. This story was in fact amazing, I cried through the whole thing.
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  • From ANON - Chemic on August 06, 2005
    Wow... Just wow. Absolutely beautiful. I cried pretty much through the whole thing... And I don't ussually cry over stories. Wow. Amazing..
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  • From ANON - Tater on June 28, 2005
    Wow, all your stories put songs in the back of my head so here are a few.

    Ghost Of You- Mcr
    Ghost of You- Good Charlotte
    Scars- Papa Roach
    Numb-Linkin Park

    That is SOO sad, wow, that made me get up and sob twice. GEEZ. What're you trying to kill me? Lol! Great story, you're an awesome writer..
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  • From Kix on June 27, 2005
    Another great one.
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  • From on June 26, 2005
    OMG, this was beautiful. I love the way it was written, and the song fits everything so well. Beautiful job, made me wanna cry. I love the way you wrote Gerard, and how much you captured him. Once again, beautiful work!.
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