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Reviews for The adventures of Lindsay Lohan: Stage XXX

By : Elklodge
  • From ANON - wat ever on August 24, 2005
    the plot was horrible the story was horrible u need to work on ur writing the idea was good but work man work
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  • From ANON - Silver on July 09, 2005
    REALLY BAD AND DISGUSTING....damnit....you need to learn how to write better...and remember PARAGRAPHS ARE YOU FRIENDS....
    IM really sorry to say...but you need to go back to grammar school...FOR GRAMMER...*fumes*
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  • From ANON - Quiet One on June 24, 2005
    Not a bad fic, but your writing could use a bit of polish.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2005
    That was awful. And I'm not talking about the subject matter, I mean the writing and how the "plot" developed. It reads like a cheap porno. Did you type this one handed?
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  • From ANON - Scrawl42 on June 07, 2005
    1) Your writing sucks on a technical level.
    1.5) Your writing sucks on all levels, actually.
    2) I find it amusing that you reveal your latent homosexuality by describing the huge penises, and also with the anal rape. I'm not going to psychoanalyze you, but maybe that's why you want to see women in humiliating positions?
    3) Suck my internet cock.

    http://www.smartania.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=35
    I contributed to this, and I'm glad to put it to good use.

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  • From ANON - Manny on May 31, 2005
    good stuff, my man,include more girls next chap
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