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Reviews for Temptation's Wings

By : Erzulie
  • From LordStrawberry on August 16, 2005
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    ,~,~,,sugoi,,~.~,
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    ..again..^-^..

    KEEEP !!

    Lord
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  • From ANON - Cassie on August 16, 2005
    Another good chapter! I hope Kaoru gets a better mind set towards Kyo! I hope you update soon I just love your story!
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  • From on August 16, 2005
    Ahh, next chapter.
    Maybe Kyo's going to begin to "trust" Kaoru now? Because he wants Totchi safe, ne, and to know what he's doing ....
    Hrm. Very intriguing. Are we going to see more of Die and Totchi soon? And Shinya's part was especially interesting.
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  • From ANON - Sakuchan on August 05, 2005
    Wow,I like Shinya's apparition! ^o^
    Your plot is soooo good...please more!!
    I want to see if Kyo falls in love with Kaoru,no matter what he thinks at first ^^
    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on August 05, 2005
    I love your story and I hope you update real soon!
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  • From ANON - yami990 on August 04, 2005
    oh more please. shinya is a spiritual guide for his people. hmm i have a feeling that we shall be seeing a fair bit of him in the future even if it isn't right away. kyo has a tantrum. why am i not surprised? oh that's right kyo being a prince is feeling humiliated for enjoying the sex with kaoru and thus takes it out at himself by breaking everything in a tantrum. admittedly it was a bit predictable that he was so angry that he went into the rage but the clawing at himself isn't exactly all that expected and is a very nice touch. i'm wondering how totchi's going to act when it's his first time with die? is he going to be as stuburn as kyo or is he going to be slightly more willing? here's cookies pocky and pudding to help you write more.
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  • From LordStrawberry on August 04, 2005
    I dont know why I didnt review for so long..simply forgot it I think, sorry..
    But I read every chapter at once !!
    Its so great to read, so well written and you describe everything so nice..I cant get enaugh..
    I look so forward to the next chapter, and many thanks you update so fast, its great..of course..^-^..
    Somehow I didnt like Shinya how you described him..I dont know why, maybe because I would have liked Kaoru to see the scene..so that he realizes what he has done to Kyo..and because I dont think this destruction shows his weakness, and even if so..ah, who cares, just move on the way you want to..^-^..and be sure I am going to like it !!!
    THANK YOOOOOU FOR THIS FF !!!
    One of my favourites, and if baka-me would finally find out how to recommend stories yours would be recommended, someone help me..

    Lord
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  • From ANON - Kimi Kumiko on August 04, 2005
    O.O Wow, another great chapter. God, I love this story! *does happy dance* I'm glad you updated so soon. Makes me very happy! I think I should give you something for the wonderfulness... but what do you want is the question? I'll let you decided, but for now... Love the story, please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Yu~ki The Vampire Prince on August 04, 2005
    Yes yes i do like it!!! *****
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  • From Plastiktanne on August 04, 2005
    Hi! Just thought I'd drop a line, because this is by far my favourite story! I love the setting and how the characters work with each other. Though you might want to try describing the surroundings a little more, it will make the world even more real. And today you actually updated twice! I'm so happy, I can't wait for the next chapter!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Sakuchan on August 04, 2005
    Every chapter of this fic makes me more curious ^o^
    Please more! I love your writing ^_^
    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on August 04, 2005
    Please write more! I love your story! I can't wait for your next udate! You have such a great imagination! You give great details to your story as well which helps in seeing it come to life! Keep up the awesome work pleaseeeeeeeee! Oh and if you could will you please email me the next time you update I would so love it if you would!
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  • From ANON - Kimi Kumiko on August 04, 2005
    It may be a shorter chapter, but I'm still loving it. Though I wished you'd write more or faster, I won't bribe you or anything. Lovely chapter by the way. Can't wait to see what happens when Die takes Toshiya back with him. And also the secret behide Shinya. Ah! Love to read more so write soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - yami990 on August 04, 2005
    the chappy does seem a bit choppy but if you've got problems at home it isn't uncommon for it to reflect in writing. hehe die threatening the goblin was interesting to picture. please please write more. here's cookie pudding pocky and a few stuffed animals to rip up to help you write more and deal with the frustration of the homelife.
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  • From ANON - Yu~ki The Vampire Prince on August 03, 2005
    Toshiya a little angry heheh whe want his kyo but ill they meet? i bet so ^^ iot so good you made me addicted to it @.@
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