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Reviews for Temptation's Wings

By : Erzulie
  • From FilthyWarumono on February 12, 2009
    I can't even begin to explain how much I love this story. I like AU, but this one has got to be one of the top for me! It's very hard to pull off so much fantasy in a story without completely destroying the plot or characters, but I love it. It satisfies my need for an excellent storyline, and my perversion for abuse, slavery, and sex. >D

    All in all, I hope you havne't dropped this story, because it has a ton of potential and I hope it continues. It's amazing!

    Keep up the great work, and I know you won't leave me dissapointed.

    P.S. Kaoru is a hot ass mother fucker and I love him.
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  • From Isurixo on February 25, 2007
    OMMGGG! This is probably the best fic I've ever read! Please update, ;__; since two years ago. I love all your stories, the way you write them is love. =D
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  • From ANON - Kyouten on January 12, 2007
    ...Wow. Just wow! I love this story; it's my favorite AU fic EVER! I'm inspired to do fanart for just about all of the characters... If you can send me an email so I can give you it, I'd love that! I'm working on a picture of Kyo right now... so yeah, just send me a note at kielianpup (at) yahoo (dot) com, and I'll get it to you. Thanks for writing such an awesome story!

    ~Kyouten
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  • From ANON - anon on February 01, 2006
    O_O this is the best story I've ever read!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Devy on January 05, 2006
    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh !! Erzulie-samaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!
    When will the next chapter appear here !! >o
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  • From ANON - Kodi on December 23, 2005
    Ah! My favorite author! ^-^; When will you update? I miss reading a chapter what felt like every week. It's been quite some time, ne? Get to it. -Snap snaps.-
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  • From ANON - chan on December 17, 2005
    Erzulie-san ? Did you disapear ? TT
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  • From Sekiseishi on November 29, 2005
    Nooooo! You must write more! I implore you! I've just gotten into it! How cruel can you be? *tear* *faves* I'm totally recommending this as soon as you get up the next chapter.
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  • From on November 29, 2005
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!
    This is one of the best fics I've read in months!

    I don't know what it is but your writing evoques the most vivid pictures in my head.
    Normally I'm not that much into this whole fantasy stuff, but this fanfic really captured me.
    The fact that you were able to create this whole realm of dragons and stuff, is just amazing.

    And I dare say that the whole Training-chair-thingie was the best half-rape/half-lemon I've EVER read (and I've read a whole bunch of crappy lemons...)

    Although the idea of male pregnancy is a little bit strange, I like it nonetheless because it's Kyo who gets pregnant.


    Please, you HAVE to write on, I really want to know how the story develops!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Jen on November 01, 2005
    More more more pleeeeeaaase! ;o; I adore this fic and have been dying impatiently for an update. XD I want to see pregnant Kyo! I love the idea after reading what's been written so far.
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  • From ANON - Cassie on September 28, 2005
    I love your story and I was happy to see another update! I hate Hakuei and I guessing soon I will hate him more! I hope Kaoru saves Kyo soon! I want Miyavi punished for what he did! I hope Die and Totchi's relationship is going well since we haven't heard much on their part! I hope to read your next chapter soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sakuchan on September 28, 2005
    Wah,I didn't expected the appearence of Hakuei...but the idea of him half goblin is great XD
    Poor Kyo,seems that everyone for a reason or another,wants him as a slave... (me rises an arm: me too! me too! XD)
    Well,maybe Kaoru will go and "save" his prey?
    More more!
    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Kyo on September 27, 2005
    I'm in love with your dragon pixie Kyo, he's so adorable! In a..scary?..way of course, haha. Myv was such a douche, and certainly would have some form of an evil aura wrapped around his 'innocent' childish personality. I liked that. Kaoru is also very dominant with a rather...dominant pixie, as well, kudos to that for not making Kyo willingly (even though his body defies his mind) indulge in slave sex. Of course you have hinted that Kaoru does not see Kyo as a normal 'slave', and perhaps wishes for Kyo to love him some day, ne. This can only mean Kaoru needs to save Kyo to gain a form of trust! Woohoo, haha. I like this story a lot, but you make me feel like a shitty writter..xD~ fufufu. Hurry up with the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - DanSan on September 27, 2005
    :D ;________; :D
    You know I love your fic... please, update it soon, please!!!
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  • From ANON - Sakuchan on September 23, 2005
    You're always able to surprise me *_*
    I'm really curious about Kyo's fate now!
    Please more!
    Good job ^o^
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