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Reviews for The Battles of Life And Death

By : LyricPF
  • From ANON - Kallena on September 06, 2005
    I love this story.Great work love
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  • From ANON - Carinito on August 18, 2005
    :P I know I know I said I wasn't gonna but whatever. Even if ya didn't keep your promise here is mi review.
    This is the best chapter so far, good job. You better update, you lazy bum. People actually like this so you got no excuse.
    Really nice on all the characters, but I want some more Billy. Love the relationships on the characters. And another reminder. YOU DO have OTHER stories! Hn.
    Anyway I do like it and hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - Tater on August 18, 2005
    YOU! INCLUDED.MCR.LYRICS! MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE ROCKS MY PANTIES! I LOVE YOU! AND THE STORY!!! OMG!! *spazz attack*
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  • From ANON - myob ty on August 18, 2005
    yup myob is me the email guy hey i like what you have done so far keep up with same story line you got going i dont think you need any changes have him meet the twins and stuff and make lu and sey give the hint well
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  • From ANON - Xtreme17nc13 on August 17, 2005
    I have a few pointers for you. First off: less lyrics, more fiction. It can really kill a good story when there isn't enough of the story. Also, I think that Billy had blond dredlocks(spelling?) when he was younger. He might have been taller than 5'3 too. But, I'm not all that sure, because I haven't done extensive research [yet!]. Let me know if I'm wrong or if this helped. I love the story line though, it sounds very interesting. Keep up with it. I'll be reading Ch. 2 tomorrow, I don't have time after the review :-( Toodlez! --Ashlee
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  • From ANON - myob ty on August 16, 2005
    hey i like what you got going here its really good keep it up
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 06, 2005
    I'm loving your story, but the character bios are a little confusing. The ages and then their grades are messed up unless you want most of them to have been left back a year. Billy would be 16 would be either a sophmore or a junior, John would be out of high school, T.J would be out of high school, Tom would be either a junior or a senior, Sey is correct and Lu would be either a junior or a senior. The only way john and tj would be in high school would be if they failed to graduate on time.
    But keep up the good story writing.

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  • From ANON - Germaine on July 31, 2005
    Nooooo! Billy! I can't believe you would keep him in your closet! (...Heh, when's he coming out?) You better feed him! ...Anyway...it's really good! I just wish that school would start soon so Billy could meet Benji and Joel... And I'm not too sure about John and Tim being together. I mean, it wouldn't hurt to get them together but I think it would be better if they just stayed friends. Plus, you can really torture Billy (Sorry but I *love* angst) so that he'll worry what his brother would think if he were gay AND you can put in a little bonding moment between him and John. And a lot more stuff. (Shrugs) I don't know... If you want to make John and Tim boyfriends, go right ahead. I'm just tellin' ya what I thought you could do if they stayed straight. ...And by the way, if you haven't decided if you want it to be a Benji/Billy or a Joel/Billy, I'm defiantly rooting for Benji/Billy. I just wanna squeal whenever I read/write about them doing...uh...things... Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Germaine on July 08, 2005
    Your getting off to a great start. I'm dying to read more, so it goes needless to say that you MUST update. Or else... (evil grin) I will take Billy hostage and you'll never see him again! Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
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