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Reviews for True love never dies

By : Crowesaga
  • From ANON - Dragon on October 06, 2006
    Where did you get to make the girl from Sweden?

    By the way, luv the fic!

    see ya
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  • From ANON - ang on October 02, 2006
    Very nice story so far. The plot is unique, and the writing is good. Editorial corrections are easy to fix; choose beta readers who can help resolve them.

    I look forward to additional chapters.


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  • From ANON - JC on July 02, 2006
    I liked this story a lot, you have a very good grasp of the language, far better than some English-speaking people I see on here! Very, very well written and I hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - P-tel on February 18, 2006
    VEry good story, a good start and well, very good. I love it! Pls. continue the brilliant work!

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  • From ANON - ducky007 on November 20, 2005
    When are you gonna update??
    ~Lexie~
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 17, 2005
    This is a good fic so far...I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Pained on August 04, 2005
    With a little polishing, this could get really good. It's an interesting and pretty original idea, and there's a good non-sappy realism here.

    HOWEVER! There are a lot of little mistakes that should have been proofread out before this was posted. Spelling errors, missing words, tense shifts - just too many distracting little errors. And they are distracting for many readers, it's hard to get really into a story when you're constantly saying "Oops, that's wrong".

    Just a little more proofreading, and you could have something fabulous.
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