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Reviews for The Babysitter

By : redqueeninwonderland
  • From ANON - Sanne on December 28, 2005

    You should write a book. Like, honestly. You rock!
    OMFG, that's the best story ever. I love it so much. the best ending ever. You do rock. You could publish this!! Well, you could change the names, so it wouldn't seem like a fan-fic, but a really well-thought story about an older entertainer-guy and a young girl, who still is a teenager. It's perfect.
    If this is the ending, maybe I'd like maybe just a chapter or something, that explains how it went for her. Or maybe not. This is the perfect ending,maybe that would ruin it. This story is MANIFIQUE, perfect, lovely, great and very, very good.
    I have enjoyed this story SO so so so much. You MUST write more stories.
    Congrats! You have made .........................
    T H E P E R F E C T S T O R Y E V E R!
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  • From ANON - Jaymee on December 28, 2005
    Ack no...it over!!! BUt it was a good ending....but I say that you write like a 3 years later sequal....like Billie and Ava were talking about....please?:( haha im desperate--Good job with this fic it's my #1 favorite!!!
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  • From ANON - Laydee on December 28, 2005
    "I know how you feel. You don't know if you want to hit me or kiss me. I get a lot of that." - Saphire's profile

    True dat.

    Although I'm kinda leaning towards the hitting, unless you maybe throw us a little table scrap of hope about a sequel.....maybe?...just a little one?...or a big, huge, fifty chapters of Billie/Ava goodness one?.....No pressure.
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  • From ANON - idget on December 28, 2005
    *cries* Oh...my...god.... you did NOT just end it like that!! Thats just so mean... and yet so fucking beautiful all at the same time. GAH! I must agree with these other people and demand a sequel... seriously. This story was amazing! You have to at least write something showing her reaction to hearing Whatsername for the first time. I never review (I'm mean like that) but I had to leave something because I've been checking this story everyday since I found it to check for updates and now I think I will go back and re-read the whole story again in one sitting and cry all over again. Keep writing! Anything! I love your writing! Wee!
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  • From ANON - bob on December 28, 2005
    that's it?no more, you can't do that to your readers akfoiawerh24732635ehr923y0hdf2317-
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  • From ANON - Druscilla Ryan on December 28, 2005
    Sequel!
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  • From ANON - ThisIsGreenDay on December 28, 2005
    No! Don't end it there! MEH!
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  • From ANON - Terrah on December 27, 2005
    oh sweetie this was great - ive been thinking about it all day
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  • From ANON - -Jenn<33 on December 27, 2005
    oh dear god.
    that was one of the best
    things I've read in a LONG
    time.

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  • From ANON - Hannah on December 27, 2005
    Why such a sad ending? Im gonna start balling now. Why couldnt they end up together? Jeez if I was Ava id be dying to have to leave him. Ha.
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  • From ANON - Elle on December 27, 2005
    Oh my God. That was one of the best fanfics I had ever read, no exaggeration. Your writing is just perfect and your characters come to life. I really hadn't expected that ending, but I was practically squealing because it was just so perfect. Work of fucking art, my friend.
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  • From Eliza650 on December 27, 2005
    Oh Lordy.

    Totally heart-wrenching ending because they're not gonna be together! Of course, I have to admit (grudgingly) it rang the truest that way. I suppose I can forgive you.
    I love the implication that the song 'Whatsername' might've been about Ava. The lyrics are certainly perfect.

    The whole story was like a really good meal - I'm satisfied, but I want more because it just tasted so damn good. I think there's a lot of room here for either an unbelievable, kickass sequel, or even just a little one-shot in the future, maybe if they ever did run into each other years later. We can only hope!

    Ohhh what to say! Thank you for writing this! I got real, honest to god chills from almost every chapter, for varying reasons. Ava Monroe was one of the most richly drawn characters I've ever read. I also think Billie was portrayed perfectly, right down to the nitty gritty. All the dialogue was excellent. You have true talent, I hope you keep posting.

    Many, many kudos.

    I bow to you. *bows*

    XXO
    Kiera
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  • From ANON - kris on December 27, 2005
    Great story. I can't believe it's over. I loved every chapter.
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  • From ANON - Druscilla Ryan on December 25, 2005
    I was gone too long...the best part, I guess, is that I got to read three chapters...oh oh oh...I love it...I want more...I kept saying I had to go check and see if you updated but the internet would be down or I would forget...

    I wasn't disappointed!

    The only het story I read is this, so I'm glad it's still GREAT!
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  • From ANON - Maddy on December 23, 2005
    i have to say that this is one of the best stories i have ever read. please do try to update as often as you can. i am addicted to this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, update this more. it is truely one of the best stories of all time. i love it.
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