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Reviews for The Babysitter

By : redqueeninwonderland
  • From heartgrenade13 on September 09, 2005
    It just keeps getting better and better. Even without the ginormous, awesome, sex scene like in the last chapter, this is still an amazing chapter.
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  • From ANON - alicia on September 07, 2005
    my i got my hopes up thinking it be another chapter..but no =[
    HURRY! please..?
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  • From ANON - warding_off_regrets on September 07, 2005
    Awesome story! I can't wait to see where you go from here :D
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  • From ANON - ThisIsGreenDay on September 06, 2005
    Are you gonna write more?
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  • From ANON - Deefor on September 04, 2005
    Absolutely stunning. That was one of the best sex scenes I've ever read, but I'm not just praising it for that; the whole thing was beautifully written. Funny, realistic, readable...OK, the scenario with the babysitter is a cliche, but who the hell cares when it's done as well as this, and with the twist at the end? Brilliant.

    If this is the end of the fic, it stands very well as it is; if you're going to add to it, I look forward to it!
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  • From ANON - heartgrenade13 on September 04, 2005
    Sweet Baby Jesus!!!! That was one of the greatest sex scenes ever...better then in most movies..and it was in my mind..oh thank you for that...wow...
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  • From ANON - ThisIsGreenDay on September 01, 2005
    THAT WAS THE BEST EVER! Totally awesome writing! Super...SEXY!
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  • From ANON - LeVeL on August 30, 2005
    Please don't tell me that's the end. You can't just leave it like that. You MUST continue. Please?
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  • From ANON - sfhd on August 30, 2005
    I SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO knew IT!!!! it was a little obvious lol. i had this weird feeling all thorughout the chapter i was like ' why is she taking him in a seperate room?' does she have something up her sleeve? like a person can see through a window? does she want him caught? i liked it in his view better ... but why would it be in hers? it was his drea,m post soon!
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  • From ANON - Citrone on August 30, 2005
    That was hot lol, keep going with it
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  • From ANON - rylie on August 30, 2005
    I love love love this one!
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  • From ANON - Sia on August 30, 2005
    If you don't update soon I might start to cut myself a little...just a little. DAMMIT!
    Umm, Medic?
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  • From ANON - Chigaimasu on August 29, 2005
    It's great so far, and it reads well. There are a couple of misspellings that irk me, but that's just me. You're very descriptive, and that's great. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - ThisIsGreenDay on August 28, 2005
    UPDATE with some "UNH UNH" hahahaha. Makes me want to write another story on here...
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  • From ANON - heartgrenade13 on August 26, 2005
    i love this story because Ava is a lot like me...it's stays consistent too. none of the chapters are weak. Good job!!!
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