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Reviews for Tomorrows

By : druscillaryan
  • From ANON - Lore _Lowell on October 09, 2005
    Usually I don't like one-shots, but this was perfect. I really liked it. Good work!
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  • From ANON - deary ale on October 07, 2005
    this was really sweet. i really think you are very talented and keep on with the good work.
    this was wonderful. hugs and kisses, and don't stop writing such good fics!

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  • From ANON - b on September 21, 2005
    i really liked this. I hope that maybe you will consider adding more? but if not then this is still amazing. GREAT job.
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  • From ANON - SmoothieQueen on September 20, 2005
    Awsome Awsome Awsome. Through and Through.
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  • From ANON - Saphire on September 20, 2005
    Not sure how I like this one, to be honest. I'm not really a slash fan because I feel like it has characters acting totally ooc sometimes, but I'm giving it a shot.

    I'm intrigued to find out who raped him, does he know? The person knew his name which leads me to believe yes, especially since they seemed to be in room/suite of sorts that wasn't like some warehouse somewhere. I think my biggest issue right now pretty much revolves around the question 'how was this able to happen'?

    I'm a huge stickler for believablity in fiction and if it isn't there then I don't read it. Because I'm distracting myself asking that question I'm not really letting myself enjoy the story. So maybe you should address it? I dunno. I'm not going to tell you how to write your fic because obviously you know what you want to write and kudos for choosing a topic that's relatively controversial. But yeah, other than that, I'd like to see what you do with it.

    xox cherie,
    Saphire
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