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By : SpiderUnderTheGlass
  • From ANON - Xmasrose on December 11, 2005
    I really liked your story and oh my god I love Coheed and Cambria too! I love their new video 'the suffering'. ^_^
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  • From Siarra on December 11, 2005
    Oops, that was my review. Apparently I got timed out and it showed up anonymous. *grumbles*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    Oh my, I'm experiencing the warmest and fuzziest feelings I've ever had. Thank you so much. *blushes*
    This chapter was very entertaining and quite amusing; I had a feeling that Hyde would be a giggly drunk and you certainly didn't disappoint the reader in that. Too bad the after effects were so nasty. The poor boy has a naive streak a mile wide, but that only works to make him that much more sweeter. Your Gackt is once again the master of the mood swings, and in this chapter he seems rather reserved when around Hyde, well, at least a conscious Hyde. Then again, that might be due to the fact that he's contrasted against an extremely animated Hyde or because he's just down on his funk. The way you show how much he still misses Mana is very nice, and all in all you've managed to avoid some of the tackiest vampire fic clichés, something that is very commendable.
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  • From ANON - Matt & Ian on December 01, 2005
    I have to say....i love it.....i feel im in the story..and i love how the characters are progressing thus far,,,(i thin were in love with gackt and hyde)

    (ps....its tooo short)
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 28, 2005
    yay, new chapter! insight into gackt's thoughts is very good, and drunk-hyde next ch?? can't wait! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Laamberry on November 26, 2005
    wooaaaahhh o___o i am....so in awe of you *bows before your mightyness* i myself am writeing a book...and i have been baseing some of my writeing structure off of you. your story is GOD!! and i--....wait....LEEHOM SANG "LAST NIGHT"?! o______o i....i didn't know!! and i've watched that movie more then physically possible! omg omg omg omg!!!!........................see? you teach me many things. ;;_;; please....write.....WRITE LIKE THE WIND!!!! oh, and AIM me some time so i can be all like " hey...>.> whats gonna happen next? well? hmm?" and worship some more 8D.......now wheres my cupcake? (=_=)/ bye bye.

    - Laamberry
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  • From Siarra on November 21, 2005
    Again, a slightly calmer chapter but by no means in a bad way. It builds up the story wonderfully and adds to the chemistry between the characters. I like how the akwardness between them is slowly turning into friendship, and it's obvious that there's room for more further down the line. Now that we have a good grip on your characterization of Gackt, he's a much more likeable on the whole as we don't have to worry about his angle. Also it's nice to see him having feelings again. He's a tad bit dramatic but entirely in a good way, fitting his character well. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Hyde, I can only imagine all the possibilities...
    As a hint; You'd save yourself from a bunch complaints of if you were a little more specific about Gackt's vampiric traits, such as his "vampire senses" and his diet. You mentioned drinking blood but also he's going to a restaurant for people food. Some people are unbelievably picky about that sort of thing...
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  • From ladygizarme on November 16, 2005
    yay! a gackt/hyde vamp fic!! wooot!! i like it so far, though it's kinda sad mana wasn't in it more but oh well, gackt/hyde is too kawaii... and other than some typos and missing words/grammar errors here and there, i think you're doing excellent ^__~ i hope you write more sooooon
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  • From ANON - Arcander on November 12, 2005
    oooh! I love your story! I'm looking forward to reading more of it!
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  • From ANON - Jo on November 09, 2005
    Hey Jamie-kat-mom,
    :Waves repeatedly in a hyper manor: I
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  • From Siarra on October 30, 2005
    Cool, I like this chapter very much. The beginning was awesome, like from a good horror movie, and the rest of the chapter played itself out very nicely. The mood was mellower than in the previous ones but by no means too slow. It was great and let us get to know your characterization of Hyde very well. I'm not quite sure what to make of Gact so far because of the mood swings he seem to go through but I'm certain that will pass as we learn more about his current storyline. The dialogue was awesome and well fitting to the circumstances, further making your Hyde a very endearing character. You also have a real talent for build up and description and lucky for us, you're not afraid to use it.
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  • From ANON - Yume2x1 on October 30, 2005
    Great chapter....I really love this story....^o^

    I was so happy to come back from my evil exams and find that it had been updated....twice....I be teh lucky.
    Anyway...keep up the good work and please update again soon. I love how Gackt is treating Hyde in this....so cute.

    Ja ne
    ^o^
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  • From ANON - Draconix on October 29, 2005
    I like it, but i'm a tad confused. Is Gack a vampire? and Hyde's normal right?
    anyway i'm waiting for the next chap!
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  • From Siarra on October 24, 2005
    Wow. So far this story seems very interesting. You've built the settings deliciously and as a whole, your writing is nice to read. Unfortunately there are quite a few misspellings, some of which can easily spoil the mood. Also it would seem that you're a bit shy when it comes to writing violence, as there is a line between being poetic and being avoiding. The characters so far are very intriguing and they seem like they cold really grow on the reader in the long run. I can't wait to get more to read, and especially see the plot played out because so far this fic has been nothing short of addicting.
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  • From ANON - Rid on October 19, 2005
    Well, I think you really should continue this story! It sounds promising! ^^ And you have a good way expressing your story, I'd really love to read more. Peace.
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