Reviews for The Oddest DiscoveryBy : BernieLaraemie |
Oh my GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was the most entertaining story I have ever read, hands down! Bernie being so sophisticated and Elton acting like a toddler was so amusing! I LOVE the roles in this story, too, not just the obvious where Elton is the mother, but just the way Shelia tends to the baby Elton and how Bernie acts stern like a father. But I must say, when Dr. Madison said Elton was pregnant, I was NOT expecting that. It LITERALLY made my jaw drop! I hoenstly just thought Bernie was joking and all, like I thought it was just a funny thing to the story. I did not actually think you would go forth and take on the daunting task of making Elton pregnant! Oh my gosh that was both a shock and interesting to hear! But that was such a cliff hanger at the end, I'm sure you intended it that way, right? I'm definetly begging for more, but I have to ask, was this like a sequal to the other Elton fanfic you wrote, where Elton and Bernie had sex? Since Bernie seems to be the father here, all I can think of is when they had sex. I'm so eager to hear how Elton's parents take the news and I want to know what happens when Elton gives birth. This could be such an amazing series, but at least until I Elton gives birth will I be satisfied lol. Anyway, this was so incredible. You can be sure I'm going to get my friends to read this story, too. I know they'll get a kick out of it. By the way, amazing storytelling. Your talent is phenominal!
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