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Reviews for Snowstorm

By : Ami
  • From ANON - aj on December 01, 2005
    you make quite a lot of typing and spelling errors. I assume you type this up on a wp, using a spellcheck would be a good idea. Other than that interesting story (although a few weird inconsistencies).
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  • From ANON - Marlina on November 30, 2005
    Dang! Hot.. :)
    I wondered how awkward it'll be when Rima arrived there..
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  • From ANON - Gem on November 29, 2005
    well it's interesting, two Alan fics updated same day, both with huge angsty things going on, both without sex!!!!! C'mon guys! OK well, I want more Alan, more m/f, and more sex. Please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2005
    Ppppplease please please update pretty please
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2005
    Argh! Who's the stupid person who rung them? Please please please update I love your fic.
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  • From ANON - Marlina on November 21, 2005
    THE PHONE RANG!
    hhehhehe.. *evil grin* wonder who's calling!
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  • From ANON - gem on November 19, 2005
    oh no, interrupted by the phone. Do we need to guess who is on the phone and that this will quickly diffuse sexual situation? Bummer if that's the case. Quick, need to know, now!
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  • From ANON - Anya on November 19, 2005
    I love this fanfiction! It's one of the only ones I've read in all my years that actually sounds like a book or a real story rather than someone's excuse for smut, though Alan smut is always wonderful. I applaud you and look forward to the next chapter! Very frustrating, wonderful job!

    Anya
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  • From MissLizzie on November 19, 2005
    I love devious Alan, thanks for reviewing my story, I can't wait to read what's coming next. My life at this point is consisting of reading your story and writing my own. I wonder if you are English, I am not and sometimes I know what I want to write (in my own language) but I just cannot put it down in English, you seem to have no problems there. I absolutely adored this last chapter, don't let us wait too long for the rest!
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  • From ANON - Marlina on November 19, 2005
    Continue!
    This starting to sound interesting.. *nods*
    The part where Beth pulled his towel make me almost roared with laughter!
    WOOOHHOOO!
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 19, 2005
    Yay an update!!! I was already excited when I saw chapter 9 up but to read it and find some ACTION too, well that just made my day.
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  • From ANON - Sulwen on November 17, 2005
    Wow, I love this story! It's mostly well written save for a few typos and spelling errors here and there...your characters are wonderful. Ah, and the smut...I hope that there's more where that came from!
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  • From ANON - Marlina on November 17, 2005
    This chapter is lovely.. :)
    I like it :D
    Oh, i forgot to ask.. Is it Rima that called Alan when the phone is active again?
    The one that he said.. "Love you too.."
    Is it?
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  • From ANON - Ianua on November 14, 2005
    I loved this story, the characters both seem so real (which, I guess, they are). Your writing was quite emotive without being too emotive, you fe;t for the characters without feeling they were soppy and unrealistic. Good job, can't wait for more :D

    I drew this, sorry if it doesn't much like your characters (I know it doesn't look much like Alan, but I just drew Ami how I imagined her).
    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v139/ianua/Drawings/alanandami.jpg

    Keep up the good work

    Ianua xx
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  • From ANON - Marlina on November 13, 2005
    Great! Very relaxing.. And it's very cute that Alan is so shy!
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