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Reviews for Five Senses

By : KarmaKiller
  • From ANON - tre_cool_is_my_homeboy129 on December 31, 2005
    this story is amazing! and its not slow! just keep going and don't leave me hanging here.

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  • From ANON - sara on December 28, 2005
    hey you *pokes screen* you should write more lol that was awesome i love it u definetley should write more please??
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  • From ANON - Sadie on December 28, 2005
    DUDE!! tahst intense!! wow youve left me to tears!! i swaer!! its so good. so vivid...its should be illlegal how descriptive and wonderful the blossom of a story idea can be coming from your mouth!! i love and worship you as a writer!!
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  • From ANON - Faith on December 27, 2005
    Wow...I'm not sure I should keep on reading this...it's not good for my anxiety...
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  • From ANON - Kiera on December 11, 2005
    I'm only a fan of slash in rare instances when it's done very well, and this is definitely one of them.

    The writing is good, really really good. The dynamic between the two of them, and that whole thing about him seeing the little girl...powerful.

    I loved the line about him imagining "the defiant gleam that would be in those eyes".

    And what do you mean, you'll have an actual plot soon? lol. There already is a plot, and it's great!
    Keep it up!

    XO
    Kiera
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  • From ANON - Krystal on December 08, 2005
    Great story,please update soon. I really want Billie Joe and Mike to be happy...together.
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  • From ANON - Emily on November 06, 2005
    Amazing! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - blackxeyeliner on November 06, 2005
    this is wonderful so far. I hope that you get some more of it up soon.
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  • From ANON - Druscilla Ryan on November 05, 2005
    Oh, God, hon, don't apologize. I know how you feel with college. Shit like that happens.

    Great update. Sorry it took me so long to review. This is just so ... I can't wait to see where it goes. It's so different that you can't see the next turn at all and it's fantastic.

    My favorite parts are when Mike stares at the sun and when He comes into the room and Billie just knows.

    So powerful, real, raw. Amazing.
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  • From ANON - Krystal on November 05, 2005
    This is a great story.I feel so sorry for Billie...and Mike seems to be the only one feels his pain...and I love how you didn't make Adrienne the bad guy here.Please update soon.I hope Billie will be able to see again.
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  • From ANON - Rebel_whatsername on November 05, 2005
    Yay an update! Poor Billie Joe and poor Mike. I hope school work doesn't drive you insane . . .it's evil, I know. Take your time with the updates . . .it's worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - Lore_Lowell on November 05, 2005
    Oh, I understand. Shit happens, right? Anyway, I think it goes better when it goes slow, so take your time. Update as soons as you can! ;D
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  • From ANON - Mouse on November 02, 2005
    Will Billie Joe still be able to play? Those doctors were bastards, I'd like to see 'em get beat up. Great fic.
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  • From ANON - Namida on October 27, 2005
    dude this story is awesome! very sad and angsty but fantastic none the less! any who like i said, great story and u are fabulous, now go write more! ;P
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  • From ANON - Rebel_whatsername on October 26, 2005
    EVIL DOCTORS!!! I'm so glad Mike threw his coffee on them . . .even though you made them both up, I hope they end up with third degree burns from that coffee!!

    Anyway, I'm LOVING this story! I can't wait for more!! UPDATE!!
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