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Reviews for The Winter Guest *Complete*

By : MissLizzie
  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2006
    fantastic!
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on March 10, 2006
    YAY!!! An update. *dies* More more!!
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  • From ANON - sacara on February 11, 2006
    I love it I love it I love it :)
    can't wait until you finish the next chapter - please hurry, you have me beggin here :)

    a wonderful job of a romance story
    ta
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  • From ANON - Dragonchild on February 01, 2006
    that was so good, continue plz!
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on January 28, 2006
    Wow. Your story had me soo pissed until I read the last chapter. I was like NO!! NO!!! This is fiction dammit! I demand an unrealistic ending!!! :D But you're keepin' hope alive.

    And also, this is the first real person fan fiction I've ever read. Now, mind you, I adore Alan. Think he's just fantastic. But not butt-crazy in fan girl love with him but I certainly wouldn't kick him out of my bed. But... while it's fun and incredibly naughty to read, it feels sort of dirty and violating. And I'm not sure I'd ever want to meet him after reading this. I know he has nothing to do with the story obviously (other than being a muse) but I don't know. Does that make sense? Very dirty. But you know I'll keep reading. I just hope you update quite often.

    Your thought process is lovely and you paint fantastic pictures with your writing.. either way.
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  • From ANON - Sandy Jean on January 26, 2006
    i can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work. :)
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  • From ANON - ZahariaCelestina on January 25, 2006
    Hello there! I thought I'd leave a little note to tell you that I enjoyed reading your story. There are many nice images there and I think it's strongest feature is the rhythm of the plot. The cliffhangers are very well dispatched throughout the chapters, and it really keeps the reader wanting to read more. In my humble opinion, some parts are a tad too romantic, but hey, it's supposed to be, in a way, it's Rickman prose after all. Careful with your French, though; there are some mistakes, and there are orthographical mistakes as well (e.g., "of" for "off" on many occasions). I found the accident episode very clever, though M. Rickman would never play young Snape himself; I expect someone else will play that part in movie 5... and, as Sirius is young in that scene, too, he would not be dressed in a filthy outfit; he would be dressed Hogwarts-like, just like Severus (hence no black cloak at the hospital). I also wanted to point out that, in many aspects, you have portrayed the post-traumatic stress disorder typical reactions very well, even if the attraction between them is still left too unexplained (a woman who has been through what she has been through would have been far, far more distrustful at the beginning; she would not trust someone implicitly like that for no apparent reason). I particularly liked her reaction to the reporter; I thought it was very believable and dead on. But someone who has been traumatised like that will definitely keep in mind that the man she loves has been unfaithful to his partner... and, therefore, might also be unfaithful to her. Just a thought. Happy writing, and I'll certainly read your updates!
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  • From ANON - Queen of Randomness on January 22, 2006
    AAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cliffhangers! I hate cliffhangers! Please hurry and update soon. I can't wait to see how Katie fights back.
    -Katie
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  • From ANON - jo on January 08, 2006
    hey. i am in love with ur story. i check everyday to see if there has been a new chapter posted and i cant wait for the next one. keep up the great work because i am devoted to ur writing. :D love jo
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  • From ANON - Cassidy Rain on January 07, 2006
    Mmm... Exquisite. If there is one person i love after Severus Snape, it's Alan Rickman! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Marlina on January 07, 2006
    That's lovely Mizzlizzie!
    I almost cry.. When i read the line "I'll fight for you"..
    Gonna be waiting for your next update.
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  • From ANON - AJ on January 07, 2006
    OK, I don't hate you any more! Now, I only hate you for leaving it there! Please please please update soon!
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  • From SataiDelenn on January 05, 2006
    Very good chapter as usual Lizzie!

    Just one little thing..... Instead of "where", it should be "were". For example, instead of "People where heading home," it should be "People were heading home."

    Other than that, I LOVED it!
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  • From ANON - Katie on January 05, 2006
    AHHHHH!!! Thank you sooo much for finally updating. I think I've been checking the page every day, just becuse you might maybe update though. It's so wonderful. Okay, I'm totally blank now what else to write because *squee* is pretty much everything I'm thinking right now. But update soon, ya?
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  • From Angie30 on January 05, 2006
    Go Kate! Fight for your man! lol (No disrepect intended) Chapter was really awesome and the fact that Gary is being so obvious at being a matchmaker *Grins* Can't wait for you to update again my dear.
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