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Reviews for Make-Up

By : aclassicpirate2
  • From LizzieSwan on November 01, 2007
    I love it! The prologe is shocking. And then the begining of the whole store..HE was going to ask ger marry him!!! OMG OK I'm sorry! I't great beginign I'm sure it's gona be a amazing fanfic!
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  • From Extraho on June 17, 2007
    oh please tell me she didn't die!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Raevyn on July 15, 2006
    im liking it...definatly need more xx
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    I like it. Keep going. Keep Writing.
    MORE MORE MORE

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  • From ANON - courtney on January 11, 2006
    hey you ever gonna fuckin update or what? its good so update for christ sakes!
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  • From ANON - lili on January 11, 2006
    this sounds like a great idea for a story.
    maybe you could substitute a few of the 'Cassandra's for 'her' or 'she' to even things out a little?
    look forward to more chapters!
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  • From stellaomega on January 10, 2006
    I can see that you've worked on this story, and put some thought into it. But you have a long way to go yet- I hope you enjoy every step of the journey!
    Your grammer, my darling, is atrocious. Your sentences run into each other, as if you'd forgotten where to put periods and question marks. I can see a good plot about to happen, but I want to mark up your work with a red pencil!
    In this second chapter- a "Great Dame" would have big hips and gorgeous boobs. A "Great Dane" has four feet and a waggy tail :D
    Is this dog going to show up further along in the story? Because, if not- you could lose it altogether, and no one would miss it.
    Keep writing! I want to know how it all comes out!
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  • From ANON - michelle on January 07, 2006
    Like your story so far. The plot is believable, so it makes the story really good. What I would give to have that job and able to see him everday and get to talk to him, not to mention be able to get that close and get paid to touch him!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - courtney on January 06, 2006
    so far so good. keep going with it. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    be more relistic
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  • From ANON - Daisy on January 04, 2006
    The plot line is good, and I am enjoying the story, but you need a beta, you have too many spelling errors, which gives the impression that you hurried through it. This is not a flame, keep on writing, with a little care your spelling will improve.
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  • From ANON - hana on January 02, 2006
    that was great
    never red something like that
    so emotional so powerfull
    can't wait for the next chapter

    keep it going
    you are great

    hana
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