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Reviews for London Skies

By : SarBrook
  • From ANON - Taima on September 10, 2006
    THIS IS WONDERFUL!!! I love the emotion and the tension. Please tell me there's more coming.

    ~~Taima~~
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  • From ANON - lee on August 22, 2006
    good story please keep it up
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 31, 2006
    very nice work so far.... please update
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  • From ANON - elf on July 19, 2006
    Oh my god!!! i freakin' love this story! at the moment i really need an orlando fix cos i just saw kingdom of heaven and i loved it cos he can act in this one unlike in troy and and and ...heh yeah just a little obsesed. and dont worry to much cos your main character doesnt really come off as a mary sue. she's actually very good for an own character.anyways... update soon cos this story rox!
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  • From ANON - Mari on July 13, 2006
    I love it! I'm not a crazy Orlando fan or anything, can't say I like his roles much, but I think he's a pretty cool guy in real life, based on what I've heard, of course. This story emphasizes that, you definitely know how to keep the reader's interest! Keep going with this! :)
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  • From ANON - Jessie on July 10, 2006
    This is amazing.

    More please!
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  • From on July 10, 2006
    So glad you're continuing this! It's my favorite on the site so far. I love the banter and easy interaction between them, and Sierra's a great OC.

    Very good, update soon!

    XO
    Eliza
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  • From ANON - Saryn on July 02, 2006
    You've got to keep writing this. It's really a gem. Love it.
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  • From ANON - lilsteves on February 13, 2006
    awww! this is such a good story! it actually has a PLOT! wow. plots are ALWAYS good. I'll be checking for updates!
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  • From ANON - crystal on February 11, 2006
    update. i love this. u should have them married in the end or something. and if they are going to have sex, let Sierra limping thing that most people don't believe that happens. i always wanted to see that happen to someone story. think about it and keep on going.
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  • From ANON - Gracie Lou Friedbush on February 11, 2006
    Wow! I'm greatly surprised with this Fiction; I was expecting what one usually reads in a category that tweens love to write in... Mary-Sues, expectations in him, "falling in love with her instantly", etc. But from what I can tell, it won't turn out like that at all - I like how she's independent and the nicknames. ;)
    If you would like any help... even with someone just looking over it to see any mistakes before you post it, I would love to help. Or even to bounce ideas off of... You're welcome to email me :)

    -Grace
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  • From ANON - Arden on February 09, 2006
    Ohh! i like this! i hope to read more. obviously i can't until March, but i'm hoping for a lovely update then. don't make her too lonely for too long! And let Orli recover!lol. i really like this. your not rushing it. you're just sort of letting it be normal. in a good way. write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2006
    Ok, wow! I have to say that I am so suprised at how great this story is and you haven't even really started yet! I love the easy flow it has and the interaction between them is amazing. I can not WAIT for an update on this. The only thing this story needs is longer chapters.. because I am selfish...;) Thanks for posting this!
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  • From ANON - Laura on February 02, 2006
    Hey that was a really good start! I would like to read more of it. I think it's great that you didn't do the whole "I don't recognie Orlando Bloom" thing!!! (tho I've done it before ;-)
    Anyways, it sounds like it's gonna be interestsing. Loved the panty thing...Just when you think it can't get any worse....;-)
    Keep up the good work!
    xxx Lauraxxx
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  • From ANON - jw on February 02, 2006
    LOL! What a first impression. Her luggage opening up and spilling out all over the place, only to have her panties spill out and land on Orli.
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