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Reviews for A kiss so fatal

By : heavenleigh
  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2006
    ooooh let ville run away! and er...say that was bammies evil twin or seomthgin. lol. sappy ending!
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  • From ANON - JenaVeveValo on February 06, 2006
    Woo hoo! Kick ass! Can't wait for more! Keep it up!!! love ya! Good Luck!!!
    Jen
    *P*L*H*V.S.*W*H*S*
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  • From ANON - Gwts on February 03, 2006
    Forgot to add...hmmm thinks about what could happen...if Ville gets away the story will end faster,but if he doesn't....I think you get my point.I want more story.The longer the better,chapters not so short next time,okay:)
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  • From ANON - Gwts on February 03, 2006
    Poor Willa!
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  • From ANON - HildeB on February 03, 2006
    I'm a bit late catching up,but I'm curious to see what would happen if he caught him.I've not read a story like this before.
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  • From Sacredbliss on February 03, 2006
    Well I really like this it has a lot of potential, however the section in which you described Ville' thinking he brought this on himself seemed a little rushed, and I think a little more detail into that section and this would be a wonderful piece of angst. Also I quite like the idea of Bam realising what he has done and being consumed with guilt. Feel free to drop me a line if you want any help with this I really do think it's brilliant.
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  • From ANON - VanillaRaspberry on February 03, 2006
    AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!That was way too short!!!Good job though.
    This is getting interesting.I say let Bam catch him...lol
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  • From ANON - snoogins...yea i no on February 03, 2006
    omg did i say u could just stop lmao
    good work hun
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  • From ANON - VanillaRaspberry on February 02, 2006
    I thought the chapter turned out very well.I just wished it was longer...Waiting for more!
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