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Reviews for Untitled, Miyav/Rose

By : hyde
  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2006
    Gah! I love it! More! My only critisism is that a couple of times (just briefly) you switched between past and present tense, which was a bit distracting. But other than that, it rocks- keep going!
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  • From ANON - Carola-chan on August 05, 2006
    You must write mooore!! *_*

    And of course Miyavi'd reply "Yeah,Say my name baby" when someone moans his name! *giggle*
    Anyways, awesome fic, sexy and cute at the same time, despite the errors ^__^
    One more chapter? Pleeease?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    OH YOU ARE CRUEL U MUST WRITE MORE!

    Pretty please~

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  • From ANON - E on July 11, 2006
    I liked it. Would be interseting with another chapter :)
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  • From ANON - prettydevilangellover on June 16, 2006
    I see where you had gotten confused and I should fix that along with the spelling mistakes. I said that Miyavi had put on gloss but didn't name the flavor, Rose was drinking the orange soda which Miyavi drank too, but rather then smelling the soda he smelled the lip gloss. I should fix that. Thank you. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Katie on June 15, 2006
    There were a few spelling errors in this. But over all I enjoyed it. But one thing I'm confused with. You said Miyavi applied Orange ramune lip gloss. But when Rose and Miyavi were about to kiss, Rose kept saying Miyavi smelled and tasted like strawberry. Anyway good fic.
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