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Reviews for The trouble with unfaithful lovers

By : jaymclg
  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on September 30, 2009
    RE: chapters one through eight

    Brilliantly written character interaction (with drama, and tenderness too), dialog, plot, and the characters' emotions due to the circumstances in their lives. I also enjoyed the strength of the friendships in the four main characters.

    I would love to see some LEMONS between David and Billie (pregnant ladies can be extremely horny you know).
    ;~D

    I'm looking forward to additional chapters.

    Well done--keep up the good work!

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  • From gloriousphoenix on September 12, 2007
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jade on August 15, 2006
    Update soon!! I want to know what happens next!!!
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