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Reviews for The Moon and the Sun

By : soleil
  • From ANON - Insanity on August 03, 2009
    Hey ^_^
    I know I'm running late to review your fiction. You started and finished it a long ago. Anyway I just read it (can't stop reading until the end!) and I want to say it's probably one of the best fic ever.
    I love the way you wrote the all fic. The way they love each other but can't tell because they're both afraid and hurt. It's beautiful.
    And for the fact that their isn't a lemon, well, let me tell you that's not a problem here. Don't get me wrong, I really love lemon (i'm an addict lol). But it would have been too much, not usefull, not in-character. They are searching each other during the whole fanfic and it would have been a little weird to have sex just like that.
    Anyway you did a great job!

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  • From ANON - Kyoki on December 17, 2007
    Oh deary, I came back today to read this story and the ending, all in one shot. I just love it. It's very emotional. The ending left me very relaxed and I can't help to appreciate it even more for the fact that the future is still vague for them. Love isn't always about hearts and googly-eyes after all and your epilogue gave it that final touch... ::HUGS:: This is by far the best Mana x Gackt fic I have read for so many reasons. I can honestly say it had my gut twisted in anticipaition since the first chapter ...again. Here's to hoping that you will once again venture into that world and write more along this pairing.

    P.S. I agree, Mana and Kozi is very hot! Just the one small scene they had together in this one was >> (0.0)! But overall, your Gackt and Mana moments rule my brain right now. ::BIG SIGH::
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  • From ANON - Mashou No Tenshi.. on May 29, 2007
    o.o finaly :.: i really like this fic i'm so sad cos it end u.u but i like it ^^
    really ^^ ne you take a lot of time to end it o.ó i was waiting but it's ok i like the end
    very good fic ^^ i love it ^^
    hope you write others fics so good at this one ^^
    bye bye ^^
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  • From ANON - Morgan on May 25, 2007
    Hello!
    Thought I'd drop a note of encouragement for you to update the fic ^^
    It's very well written and I was enjoying it a lot, specially because decent Mana x Gackt fics are so hard to find these days.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kyoki on March 17, 2007
    It's been so long since I've read a good Mana and Gackt fic. I'd given up on finding decent stories that didn't potray them as vampires or what not. I haven't even read anything in this fandom in the longest time...I'm so happy I stumbled across your fic. I love the way you've given a new twist on their relationship and have included the present time frame within. Seeing post Malice Mizer stories always gives me pleasant chills. ^_^ Cant wait to read the continuation. Do let me know when you've updated!
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  • From ANON - Valetta on January 06, 2007
    I am in love with this story, and (unfortunately for you) I hope it never ends. I was so happy to see you updated again! I look forward to the new chapters very much. It's just something about the way you write... mature, intelligent, with a touch of sarcasm mixed in. You're brilliant. I hope you update again soon, and possibly write even more Malice Mizer-based fanfictions in the future. I will be there to read every single one of them.
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  • From ANON - Aya on December 16, 2006
    This is not boring at all! What gave you that idea? I just recently got around to reading the chapters I missed, I've been busy with school work lately. But please update soon, I'm dying to see how the day out turns out!
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  • From ANON - Mashou No Tenshi.. on December 15, 2006
    ^o^ wooo I like this chapter a lot
    soo nice n.n
    mmm....I really like your history
    I would like to read more chapters like this one
    can't wait for the next one
    bye bye ^^
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  • From ANON - Ayano Okabe on November 12, 2006
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Gubblegum on November 06, 2006
    If you really feel the need to contact me, by all means send me an email.
    If I offended you in any way then I'm very sorry, I wasn't trying to, I was just trying to point out the fact that there were mistakes, and lots of them. I have a bit of a grammar obsession which makes me completely lose it whenever I see simple errors >.> so again, I'm sorry if I offended you in any way.
    I am well aware of the fact that English isn't Sun's first language and I appreciate how difficult it is for her as my mother comes from a German speaking country which means I pretty much have to be fluent in German or face neverending disappointment from my parents. So again, I was simply trying to point out that there were mistakes, and I know I's rather someone corrected me when I do things wrongly.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    Sun - I apologise for this, but I feel it's justified.

    Gubblegum - since you haven't left an e-mail or anything I'll do it here. If you have a problem with the way I do things, please take it out on me. Don't complain in a public forum about it - you can see my username in the reviews and it's a link to my profile, which contains my e-mail address.

    I'm only human and I don't claim to be anyone else. If I make mistakes I apologise and I'll do that now - I'm sorry I missed any errors, but I read it through a few times and found all I could. The story is legible and you can understand what is going on correct? Also most of the time the right grammar and terminology is used correct? Be grateful, because I've seen stories that are worse from native English speakers.

    Again, I'm sorry sun, but I had no other way to contact Gubblegum.
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  • From ANON - Gubblegum on November 05, 2006
    Oh God! You took so long to write that! So long!!!
    And it was worth it! But... it took so long! Oh the humanity!
    Yup, it's a travesty alright.

    ps. your beta is not doing their job properly! There were many, many mistakes. With word order for goodness sake! WORD ORDER!!! *spazzes and dies*
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 23, 2006
    I'm so glad you updated =D
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  • From ANON - Lozapher on October 19, 2006
    [Don't have time to log in...]

    Forgot to mention - when you have the chapters for me to read through, just e-mail them me.
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  • From ANON - mizu on October 17, 2006
    2nd part of my review^^: (-long story) about this pairing and it is quite like yours^^)i've never imagined that there would be someone outside that would have the same opinion^^just too great!well you are quite an amazing writer to us not only because of your style but because you just wrote down what we talked about!we were out of words. like i said: we had never imagined that there would be someone outside like you who shares this opion!^^) but to me the event where the whole "occassional love"began doesn't make sense. i think the situations doesn't fit together: mana is really sad and desperate because gackt announced his quit, calls közi to come over that he can have a shoulder to cry on and then they are ending up in bed together. the last part just doens't fit to me.. i think you wanted to point out the start of the relationship and the relationship itself of közi and mana in this chapter but the occasion is so not fitting to me... i am really sorry about saying this to you but i think that i should be honest so i am writing this to you.. but please don't take it too seriously!! i still am amazed about your fanfiction (you know that my opinon about fanfiction is rather very negative)and your writing improves in every new chapter!!
    please be kind and don't mind my mistakes because i am no english native as well^^ sometimes it is hard to express my thoughts to you so i am usally repeating myself. i'm sorry-.- but if you need help in japanese i could offer help (native).
    ???????? i am looking for the new chapter^^
    bey bey mizu
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