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Reviews for A Tragic Affair

By : VindictiveDiva
  • From JulieDoc on April 16, 2007
    Wow, damn, that was fantastic. I thought the twist with the allegorical characters was pretty cool. I also liked how the ending wasn't what you'd expect. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, but somehow, an ending where the conflict isn't resolved, or in which things turn out for the worst seems more poignant, and has greater impact. I would have liked it had you gone into your system of magic a bit more, but I understood why you didn't. It would seem to me that immediacy was called for, and you'd already done your buildup work. Further explanations would have slowed your pacing down, so it's all good :). You may not think this was "the" best story, but it certainly was one of the most original My Chem stories I've ever read. I'd like for there to be a sequel, or at least more writing in this universe, however, I understand being entirely tapped out on an idea (Plus having it be completely underappreciated). Thanks for your writing and thanks for your thanks.

    P.S.: Why am I not surprised that Ray is turning out to be especially hard to corrupt or sway? :)
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  • From Mcrmylife on April 07, 2007
    What an ending, that was great.
    I'm so glad you continued with this one, and I just love the ending so much!
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  • From Smooshy on April 07, 2007
    FINALLYYYY!!! I've been waiting for this ending, and you surpassed all my expectations. The warning to all of us at the end was very very clever. I cant wait to see what you come up with next!
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  • From Mcrmylife on March 02, 2007
    That was fantastic. Really well written. Kept me hooked all the way through.
    Looking forward to reading more soon!
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  • From pandabear on January 28, 2007
    If I wasn't a fan girl before, I am now.
    I love your heroin, she kicks more ass than any other chick.
    The ringmaster's a douche, but a nice choice of ancestory.
    Assey Mcgee's on, that show sucks.I'm off to download music.

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  • From Raevyn24250681 on January 28, 2007
    i love it! it's fantastic! and i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol update soon pls xx*R*
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  • From Smooshy on January 28, 2007
    I love this. I read it on Fandom and have been anxiously awaiting more. I loved that she is meant for Gerard, but what about Mikey..ahhhh Need more soon!
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  • From ANON - VindictiveDiva on December 28, 2006
    I'm sorry but I have to, I'm getting no inspiration at this point and it's just not that well recieved. I need to take a break and re-evaluate where I'm going with this. I'm not going to leave you guys hanging, I've finished every story I've ever written. I just need time to finish this one. Don't worry, I will get another chapter out, it's just going to take a while.

    The Vindictive Diva.
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  • From ANON - somi on November 20, 2006
    i love this story! please update soon.
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  • From JulieDoc on November 10, 2006
    This is one of the best My Chem stories I've seen on aff.net. Most of the other dark fantasy/horror stories are not as well-written. It's obvious you take your time with your story and haven't just decided to rush through it for quick "smut" gratification, and for that, I commend you. The true "Black Parade", as you have depicted it, is a fascinating concept, it reminds me of the Wild Hunt in Celtic and Norse Mythology. I eagerly await the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - VindictiveDiva on November 08, 2006
    Thanks so much for reviewing hon, I was staring to wonder because I'm getting alot of hits, no comments. I just figured the story was no damned good. Thanks again.

    The Vindictive Diva.
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  • From ANON - cherripepsiisgod on November 06, 2006
    I love your fucking face.....the story has really cultivated throughout the four part so far, and its really really got mehooked on how it will unfurl and end.....hook line sinker....

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  • From ANON - cherripepsicisgod on November 04, 2006
    Holy fucking hell!!!Mikey, a good guy, aginst gerard and over 100 damned ghosts!Hel;l fuckign yeah! I love the story, asalways there could always be some inprovement in any story, but very very little is needed here.

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