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Reviews for Sex-files of the Margera-Valo household

By : Hayley666
  • From ANON - Pyra on January 11, 2007
    Are you sure your not an expert at THIS???????? I really enjoy reading you storys you know!! They are really amazing!!! I think you should write a story...I mean just not sex but...sorta.....Im sure you could figure out some plot to go with it!!!! Nut anyways i really like all of your storys ya know!!!!Are there any other storys you have going???? Just to let you know you FAN LUV YOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Lions, Tigers, and Bammie with his pants down.OH MY!!!!!

    ~Pyra~
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  • From ANON - Valo on January 11, 2007
    Chapter four needs a bit of work. The way you word it is very confusing... you should stick with one; past tense or present tense. It skips a lot between the two.

    -x-Valo
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  • From ANON - Pyra on January 10, 2007
    OHHHHH MYYYY FREAKIN GOD!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS FREAKIN AMAZAZING!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TB13 on January 09, 2007
    Aww,the first part was a little rough,but the second part was sweet AND kinky! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Pyra on January 08, 2007
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! This was soooooo great! More......*puppy dog eyes*...PWEASE!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Valo on January 08, 2007
    Argh... that was like a porn flick. XD I loved the thought of Ville in a pilice uniform... Gods, what that a turn on. I'mm have to draw that some time. *nods* Indeed, I will...

    Though I really can't picture sweet little Ville being so rough, it was definatly well written.

    -x-Valo
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