Reviews for The Ultimate Take That Story *COMPLETE*By : MissLizzie |
Hello,
I somehow stumbled onto this story. I don't usually like reading stories with too many chapters, but your story drew me in and I read it all the way to the end. It's quite obvious to me that you went to a lot of trouble to write a very detailed story, and you did it very well. I loved the minutiae of the band's life. These little details were helpful and added depths to the characters. The only part I didn't really like is the character of Julia and her relationship with Howard and Robbie. She'd be with Robbie and then have feelings for Howard when she ran into him and then have feelings for Robbie again. I found her place in the storyline confusing. Overall though it was a very good story and the way you write it almost has me convinced that everything you wrote could've actually happened.
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