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By : classic06
  • From Mo56 on December 25, 2008
    MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU TOO!! i loved this chapter! i'm totally sad for kelly that she had to do what she did...but its about time. jeanne is gonna be sorry. carrie is like the best girlfriend ever!
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  • From Violence on December 24, 2008
    Ooooo. I really, really likes that chapter. But yeah complete lol at the whole ending section. Pretty funny. Especially where Carrie called Kelly's mom old and maybe her hearing wasn't that great.
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  • From willjames52 on December 17, 2008
    This update was really funny in some ways, the whole last part between Kelly/Carrie and Ashley, the couch thing :) If there was ever the need for a scavenger hunt, Ashley and Carrie should be on the same team because they seem to put stuff together pretty well. I have a feeling they're going to end up figuring out that Jeanne is still trying to interfere. Unfortunately, it's probably going to break Kelly's heart again. I got a little sad when Kelly was talking about everything being how it used to/or back to normal since it's obvious to the others that Jeanne isn't treating Kelly the way she used to. It's kinda like in the last chapter when Carrie felt bad that Kelly'd had to settle in a way for David, Kelly shouldn't have to settle for the barely polite way that Jeanne handles Kelly's relationship with Carrie. Loved the chapter, it was great.
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  • From Mo56 on December 16, 2008
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! can't wait for jeanne to leave
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  • From Violence on December 07, 2008
    I like how you tie in some of the actual events into the story. It's pretty cool. Too bad she never went to the nude beaches. Whoa, Carrie vs. David faceoff. Awwww, it's cute that Jason's watching out for Carrie. That was definitely one of the more dramatic and exciting chapters. uhhh, I don't really have much to say tonight. I'm kinda out of it so my comments are all weird. But I can say that I LOVED this update especially those last five lines or so. It's so sweet it makes me wanna dance on a rainbow with a few unicorns.
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  • From Mo56 on December 07, 2008
    david hodges sucks ass. go carrie!! thanks for the update. this story kicks booty!
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  • From willjames52 on December 06, 2008
    It was awesome when Kelly checked to make sure that her feet were behaving, lmao. It was cool of Jason to give Carrie some time to take care of David on her own, because Kelly probably wouldn't have said the things that Carrie did; but I'm really glad that he stepped in when he did. He is such a good guy in this story. I really enjoyed when he and Carrie were bonding over how they wanted to beat up David. I was torn between sadness and cuteness when Carrie didn't want to stop holding and 'protecting' Kelly. Is Mandy Moore going to be Kelly's opening act for the Australia shows? That would be neat. I was happy to see that the party for the end of the tour didn't have any problems, although I did snicker when I read that Jeanne interrupted Kelly and Carrie before the party. Cool update :)
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  • From Violence on November 29, 2008
    Holy. Shit. I haven't been here in awhile. So I spent the whole day reading up on every single story. Don't think I've ever read anything quite this fast and I'm not even going to attempt picking out every detail I liked from past chapters. Carrie being lonely was heartbreaking. She needs new band members. "Atlantic City, New Jersey" Whooooo! My home! I kinda laughed though at the fact that Carrie got kicked off her tour while in Jersey. It feels accurate. Seriously though, what a bunch of idiots. Why they would do that is beyond me. Awww, look at Kelly being all over concerned. Way to go Jeanne. Kick her while she's down. I lmaoed pretty damn hard when Carrie called Jeanne a bitch. Hilarious. Check you later? At least it's better than 'catch you on the flip side.' Awwww, those two are a bunch of saps, always proclaiming their love for each other. I love it.
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  • From willjames52 on November 29, 2008
    First off, Keith rules for offering to pay for the loss of the sponsors, and lol at the paps wanting Kelly to kiss "Carrie". Okay, onto the rest of the chapter, I like how you explained/created how Carrie ends up on a solo tour. Love that Kelly was there for Carrie, but that happens like every update, so I'm just repeating myself. Let's just hope no one gets drunk at the big party, especially after Carrie's "bitch" comment. Not to mention who knows what Jeanne would say to Kelly if she had one too many. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From Mo56 on November 23, 2008
    hands down....best chapter so far! it totally sucked that carrie had to quit her tour because the sponsors are jackass' but she came back from it so well. kelly is awesome and they both totally deserve each other!!
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  • From ClarkWoodFan on November 17, 2008
    Something tells me trouble is brewing...I'm still skeptical of Jeanne. It shall be interesting to see what happens when Carrie is not around. I do love the interactions between the girls. Duh, right? Anyway. Great update.
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  • From willjames52 on November 15, 2008
    Ashley still has some of the best lines lol. Although, it would be funny to one time see Carrie actually do one the things Ashley jokes about doing, just to get in the last dig. I wouldn't be surprised if Jeanne had been like recording her convo with Carrie. Or maybe she's being a spy for Clive- okay that last one was just a weird random guess, but I think Jeanne took off to quickly for her not to be up to something. Carrie's decision to not tell Kelly about the exchange is so gonna come back on her, the girl really is blonde. Kelly was just so adorable in that last scene :)

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  • From ANON - Arniow on November 15, 2008
    I don't like Jeanne.. Do you think she'd dim it down if she knew about Carrie's band being so.. bleigh ?
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  • From Mo56 on November 15, 2008
    aw that was too cute. and boo to carries band for ignoring her. they're all insane!
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  • From willjames52 on November 08, 2008
    It was nice to see Jason, Ashley and Carrie talking about the night they met, and of course it was cool that Carrie got to hear about how excited Kelly had been before she got to the hotel. I also liked that Carrie didn't back down when Jeanne wanted to be the one to go talk to Kelly. I'm really curious to see how Jeanne is going to act now after the talk with Kelly. I just hope for Jason's sake that she doesn't give him anymore details about anything lol.
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