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By : classic06
  • From willjames52 on October 01, 2008
    Interesting update. I'm kind of surprised that Kelly is having Jeanne stay at the house, though not too much. At least she said that she's not going into the dinner with her mom "blind", not very sure if she was saying it to reassure Carrie or not, but I hope everything turns out right. It was nice to see that Carrie and Kelly weren't holding any grudges after the fight, they took the fight as a stepping stone of sorts, that was cool. It was cool to see what Jason thought about the thing with Jeanne, and Ashley was great as always. Cool update.
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  • From Violence on September 29, 2008
    I still don't believe Jeanne has truly come around. It's like you're constantly trying to reassure me that it's totally legit but you're really just waiting in the wings to throw a huge snowball at me. Or maybe Jeanne did send the pictures but she did it out of the sweetness of her heart, kinda like a pround mama thing. Although hell would freeze over before that happened it's completely possible. Just like it's possible that Ashley has been leaking info this whole time because she secretly wants to be in the spotlight. Sorry, but theorizing for this story is just simply fun. Awww, at the 'go slow' part. Super sweet.
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  • From ANON - ClarkWoodFan on September 29, 2008
    Aw, another update! Great job. Well, I'm with Carrie about being skeptical of Jeanne's intentions, but I hope we're both wrong. I hope Kelly doesn't end up with a broken heart again...but I'm a sap that way. :) For the record, what is wrong with Kelly? She turned down sex??? lol. Anyway. I'm curious to see what happens.
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  • From Mo56 on September 29, 2008
    probably one of the best chapters of the story! loved loved loved it!
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  • From sueage on September 28, 2008
    yay for the update! and a long one at that. i was seriously missing this story...

    i hope jeanne is for real, but i am not buying it at all...hope i'm wrong. but lmao at the end when Carrie said she offered sex to try and convince kelly not to go. i think kelly really does need to deal with her mom, though, if they are ever going to have a chance at a relationship in the future. and if nothing else, even if jeanne is a douchebag right now and her apology isn't sincere, kelly probably needs to see that, too.
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  • From Junkyxl on September 28, 2008
    Oooh, bringing the mom back. Kelly's being so (naïvely) cute in wanting to believe her mom's for real, but I'm not buying it. Ah, I wanna know if she's still evil! Carrie's really cool though, with suggesting to beat God's ass if He hurts the girlfriend and all, what a bad ass, lol.
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  • From Violence on September 23, 2008
    You had me worried there for a minute. I thought you might actually have the audacity to break them up again. Wow, Kelly's hormones must be pretty outta whack. She's all over the place. Carrie looked like she was gonna runaway and Kelly looked like she was gonna shut Carrie out because she's having insecurities. You must be playing with the drama factor. It's interesting though, I'm eager to see where you go with that. Jeanne's finally coming around!? No. Fucking. Way. How'd that happen? Did someone finally run her over and we just don't know it yet? Or maybe she's just playing more mind games and she's secretly luring them into a mob of paps and angry, homophobic douchebags. Or maybe she's trying to make the men with the white coats take them away. Or maybe I should just sit and wait for the next update.
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  • From storyteller999 on September 21, 2008
    this has got to be the realest chapter ou have written...they acually had a real argument...and i was acually nervous for them for a second...way to go...you make your stories so real its frightning..i loved it!!! great job!!!
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  • From willjames52 on September 20, 2008
    It was totally cute that Kelly was worried about how Carrie was going to react, and then it was pretty sad when she explained why she was so upset. I liked that we could feel sorry for the both of them, like you could really get why Kelly would think that Carrie wasn't as upset, but after everything they've been through to get together, it was plain to see that Carrie was just trying to protect Kelly by being strong. That said, it became even sadder when Kelly brought up the Tony pictures/ Jeanne's apology. I kinda want to smack Kelly when she showed/told Carrie, but that's how she is, and you can get why it still upset her because the pictures have bad memories and she obviously loves her mom. I'm glad they talked and shared, that's like major for them because they haven't doen it in the past.
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  • From ClarkWoodFan on September 20, 2008
    Well, that was insanely good writing. I loved that the girls had an actual disagreement about something. lol. Not that I like my ClarkWood to be fighting or whatever, but you know what I mean. That was such a good characterization of Kelly's reaction to learning that she was the last to know. And I liked that Carrie meant well and stood her ground. She's getting to know Kelly very well. Glad they were able to talk it out. Awesome update! :)
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  • From Mo56 on September 19, 2008
    aw poor kelly! carrie just needs to hug her all night long until the girl is happy again! nice update
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  • From Mo56 on September 18, 2008
    so i'm getting bored at work and i need my CALLY fix. lol hope the next update is as awesome as the last!
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  • From Violence on September 17, 2008
    I coulda sworn I had reviewed this one. Oh well. I never understood why Jason worried so much about Kelly driving. I mean it's not like she's gonna go race a semi down the interstate, especailly not when she's got such precious cargo. "I would call you five, but I've never met a horny five year old." - one word: lmao. Man, Kelly should've known she was gonna get busted as soon as Ashley saw her. Nooooooo. *tear* Not the pictures! Damn, Jeanne. When will that woman learn? Probably when Kelly gets beaten by an angry mob at the rate she's going. But then again, major awwwwwwwww at Carrie's parents checking up on Kelly and the girls sending each other flowers. Sweetness.

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  • From willjames52 on September 15, 2008
    I kinda hope that Kelly handles this whole picture thing well, not because it isn't emotional, but it'd be nice to see her reacting to problems in a better way because of Carrie. What Jeanne did was horrible, and so not a mom thing to do, I hope Jason says something to her. Or maybe Kelly's sister can say something (sorry I can't remember her name). Also, I laughed over Ashley and Kelly's exchange over the hickey. Very cute update, sorry I didn't reply sooner.
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  • From ANON - greens on September 13, 2008
    Awesome as always-sorry I haven't reviewed lately-computer issues-butt all is well now in computer land. I love how the girls are so sweet to each other-Kelly is gonna be crushed when she finds out her mon released those pics to the press. Can't wait for more. Great job!!
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