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From willjames52 on August 17, 2008
Okay, I'm going to try to be coherent, but it's almost four am and I've been packing since... crap I can't even remember. Anyway, that was a sweet chapter, and even though there was some crying, it totally made me smile :) Thanks. I know this is probably strange, but I was really glad that Carrie gently brought up about how Kelly's mom might never accept them. Kelly's been back and forth on her mom, but it was just the way Carrie worded it, Kelly didn't have much of a reaction at all- and I think that's a good thing. When it all started, Kelly would get so upset at the thought of her mom never changing her mind. I think it says a lot for how much Kelly has come to realize what Carrie means to her, and that she's dealing with her mom issues. That was a lot to write for such a small exchange, but I wanted to say that I thought you did it well. Also, I loved Carrie's line about Reba interrogating her, and of course, I loved the end.
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From ClarkWoodFan on August 17, 2008
*sigh* Confession: Total sap here...so I LOVED THAT! Great update, really. I love what you've done with this story...can't wait to read more!
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From Violence on August 16, 2008
I love the mindless fodder that made up this chapter. Lol, interrogated by Reba. Seriously, Kelly is a hot momma. Although I think the legion of kezbos speaks for itself. Carrie proposing? Is that a reference for what might be happening in the future? 'Cause that would be the best ending ever. And then the ending had me in the awww. There's something so sweet about Kelly crying when Carrie tells her just how much she loves her. Tugging at the ole heart strings.
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From ANON - greens28 on August 06, 2008
I just got caught up w/ Ch's 66 & 67 & they both were really good. I am still enjoying your writing very much. I think U have such a talent at writing 2 people in love. I am not surprised that Kelly's mom still doesn't support her- by picking outside the concert was even low for her. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks.
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From willjames52 on August 06, 2008
I giggled when Kelly threatened to bite Alyssa's husband (sorry I can't remember his name). It's cool that her sister's family got to come to a show, but it's even better that Alyssa got to talk with Kelly. After the stuff with their mom, family support is always good. Cute update all the way around :)
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From ClarkWoodFan on August 05, 2008
Ok, so this was beyond cute. I love that little Noah as a crush on Carrie. And Carrie�s comment about him having Kelly�s eyes and that meaning she couldn�t turn him down? Cute squared! That whole interaction about �old and wrinkly� Carrie was adorable. I wouldn�t kick a 35-year-old Carrie out of my bed. ;) Kelly�s mom makes me sad, but I feel that�s pretty realistic, so props there. I'm really glad Alyssa has been that supportive, btw. Oh, and the best part for me was Carrie marking that Corinthians quote in Kelly�s bible. (Awwwww). Seriously. You are an amazing writer�and I cannot wait to read more! :)
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From Violence on August 05, 2008
I swear I have some kind of a 6th sense that tells me there's an update just waiting to be read. Wow, they learned to lock the door, what an achievement, lol. Man, there's something about Kelly and kids that just makes the heart melt. Lmao at the Carrie being old and wrinkly in 10 years. I seriously doubt that. Awww, Noah is such cutie. I love the fact that Kelly's getting full support from her sister because something tells me she really really needs it. When Kelly found that sticky note from Carrie in her bible i melted to a puddle right then and there. It was just so freaking sweet. Yeah, I awwed at the ending. Good stuff.
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From willjames52 on July 31, 2008
What was up with Jeanne asking if Kelly and Carrie could pretend to break up? Does she think that if Kelly agreed o that, that Kelly would like learn to not be around Carrie? She really hates Carrie, she's always hateful, but what she's doing to Kelly is worse. Carrie can just ignore and get angry with Jeanne, but Kelly has to try to reason it out because her mom is saying that it isn't Kelly's fault. Random, but I really hope no one gets kidnapped.
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From ANON - greens28 on July 31, 2008
Glad taht ua re back w/ an update. Great as always.Love how supportative Carrie is. Currious as to what Kelly's mom has to say.
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From storyteller999 on July 31, 2008
yeah yeah yeah i ment to write "Can" and not "Cant"...ill make sure to check my spelling the next time I review I promise. (I feel like a scolded 6th grader by the way)-->hahahaJJJKK...but no really thanks for making my gramatical errors evident to everyone, made me giggle a little bit:P:P haha!!SO about the update!!! You know who I would think mean mean mean mean MEANNNN things about...is Kelly's mom. !! Quite honestly she must be the biggest BIOTCH everr!! Who abandons their daughter just like that!!!(I know its just a story i know) but still the "character" mom is totally in need of a ass kicking!!But the way Kelly and Carrie take care of eachother is so adorable, it brings tears to my eyes! Carrie always wants to protect and hide any pain from Kelly. I Love it! O annndd i really enjoyed your Bible citing! It's truly what makes you so different from all the other authors, its the research and care and passion you put into everything you write. You didnt have to site the Bible or many of the other things you just sneak into your writing, but you do, and not many will realise it but it makes your stories that much more real to the imaginary mind. If you get what i Mean? its hard to explain. Great update!!!!
P.S- I could SOOO kick your Ass in Scrabble!!
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From ClarkWoodFan on July 30, 2008
I loved that you incorporated Kelly's faith into the story. I was glad to see her stand up for herself to her mom. Carrie was so amazing and I'm glad that Ashley was supportive and honest. Great update! :)
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From Junkyxl on July 30, 2008
Aw, Ashley's answers made me smile. But damn, I can't stand the way Jeanne is here. She's so mean to her own daughter, but I could totally see that reaction a mother has happening for real, so it's even worse. The part about the mob of people protesting against Carrie and Kelly was pretty realistic and nearly broke my heart, I've seen things like that on the news and all and it's so laughable. I mean, I'm like, they're protesting against other human beings, how much more wrong can you get? Anyway, all of that stuff aside, I really like this story, which is amazing, because I usually get bored after like 20 chapters or something, but I just keep on reading here. (so it's a compliment, lol)
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From Violence on July 30, 2008
I think I just had a heart attack. Of happiness. Because holy shit, talk about fastest update ever. And then my heart slowly crumbled, halfway through it was completely crushed but it slowly started to rebuild towards the end. I lmaoed when someone yelled if she was going to fuck her and Carrie yelled back. She just doesn't seem like the type to snap like that, especially since she's the girl who's afraid to break a plate, but I love the fact that she did. And Kelly's mom, I don't think I've ever wanted to slap someone upside the head as much as I wanna slap her. That whole scene was pretty heart tugging. I mean how much more selfish could her mom get? I found it sad that Kelly was searching for answers to other's bigotry in the bible. Then I had the usual rounds of 'holy shit, that's so freaking cute!' and it's usually the little things that get me the most. It was nice to get a moment like that between Carrie and Ashley. I'mma stop here 'cause this review is getting way longer than originally anticipated. But yeah, thanks for putting us out of our misery hella quick, lol.
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From storyteller999 on July 29, 2008
OKKK FIRST OF ALL I HATEEE YOU!!...haha no im just KIDDING..but honestly why would you do that to me/>?? leaving the end of the chapter at Kelly seeing her mom in the dressing room...SERIOUSLY?? SERIOOUUUSSLLYY??? UGHHHH...i loved the update and how long it was...they keep getting cuter by the second...how Carrie is still asleep but she protectivly tightens her grip on Kelly!!--> SOOOO CUTE!!...ok well thats enough of my ranting for now!!! you better update this story soon missy...or i might just have to...well...you know...do nothing...butt i cant think mean mean mean things hahaha!!! awsome job girl!!!
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From willjames52 on July 29, 2008
Loved that Kelly went out with shoes that didn't match, and for some reason I found Carrie's description/gesture of the guard named Chuck funny. The little moment between Ashley and Kelly was funny (the sympathy line). I don't know how Kelly's mom is going to react, but I like that this update was focused on Kelly and Carrie (and the people supporting them). I think it made Jeanne showing up in Kelly's dressing room that much more shocking because we didn't get to see where she's at mentally. :) Thank you
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