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Reviews for Babysitter

By : enomi
  • From SwarmOfFanGirls on March 18, 2009
    Wow, love it!!


    From Me x
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  • From Star55 on August 24, 2007
    Heh, don't mind my own misspelling of Dougie's name either *facepalms*
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  • From Star55 on August 24, 2007
    Wow, Danny & Dougie are my McFly OTP!
    This was a great first chapter! I can't wait to see more!!

    My only thing to "pick at" is your tenses don't stay the same ie: "Doguie finds a shirt to wipe his mess" it should be found to keep the tenses the same.

    But it was a great chapter!
    If you don't get many hits on here, might I suggest posting to mcflyslash on livejournal? (If you're not a member already lol) Drop me an email if you want (starrobinson55@gmail.com) and I can give you the link.

    I hope you write more! I love where this is heading. Danny and Dougie are complete love
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