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Reviews for You Better Close Your Eyes

By : Nexus
  • From ANON - sheriden on September 15, 2012
    The end of this had me in stitches. Thanks :)

    “Didn’t Ritchie tell ya, we’re having a bedroom practice today, and I’m gonna cook us all a roast. Yorkshire puds and all!” he beamed and headed for the kitchen."
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  • From ANON - Davidsbarney on September 22, 2007
    This one has hope. ^^ I like hope.... my mind can
    finish it off in a very nice way..... but anyway....
    Ritchie playing with Ian's head, yes, I can see this,
    ritchie and the headfuck. The beginning is so hot,
    just a tantalising glimpse of what we wish would
    happen.... I think the tarantula is an excellent word
    to connect with ritchie.... black and with suede like
    legs..... hehehe

    Poor ian, he's so confused from Ritchie's behaviour.
    Does it mean this or does it mean that and the man in
    black isn't going to tell him till the end and even
    here.... he could turn it all round again after the
    story finishes and probably will.

    "What am I gonna do with you, Ian?"

    "Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiss me" well that's how I see it. I
    do like the way you leave your stories open to
    interpretation. Nothing is final as in relationships,
    there isn't a finishing point.

    Well anyway, that's my two pence worth, so I hope you
    will write more. Look forward to it.

    Dbarney
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