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By : Need2ScreamNow
  • From ANON - Zippo Mother Lover on December 13, 2007
    -A/N: I would like to give a very special thanks to ‘Zippo Mother Lover’ for not only pointing out some grammar and formatting mistakes I made a couple chapters ago, but also for his/her tips on my sex scene and Zacky's last name, Thank you ^_^ that was really helpful!-

    WAAAAAAH! I was mentioned! Huzzahhhh!

    Tis a she, luv. Tis I is a she. Muaha.

    I'm so happy I helped. I love helping!!! Off to read the story now, luv.
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  • From TrajaSoryn on December 13, 2007
    Yay! You updated.
    *Does Happy Dance*
    Keep It Coming.
    I wanna know what happens on the bus.

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  • From ANON - Zippo Mother Lover on December 12, 2007
    Zachary James Baker - Just for future reference, luv! *wink~* I much prefer Vengeance mehself, but...

    Anyways, nice new chapter. I rolled out of my seat laughing when Zachary started sneaking about. Your grammar was magnificent in this chapter, and the voice are hilarious as usual! I'm glad to see them out of the hospital, as I'm sure are the rest of the bandmates. Matt's so adorably attached to Zach, you can just sense that underlying friendship between them in your story- that's another thing most writers just leave lacking. Please contiue on with this story, I absolutely love it deary!

    I'm planning on reviewing the next chapters as well- wouldn't miss it for the world. But the little teasers up at the top, the ones with all of the sex? They're evil. D: I was so sad to see how unfulfilling they were- I can't wait to read the full ones instead!

    And are Syn and Zacky EVER going to finish what they started?

    Oiya, so many questions... Answer them, pleaseee?


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  • From TrajaSoryn on December 06, 2007
    This just keeps getting better and better. I love it.
    And I love that you keep this updated.I Hate getting into a story just to find out the author's abandoned it.
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  • From ANON - Zippo Mother Lover on December 05, 2007
    Hot damn. I get on and there're FOUR new chappies!

    Made my damned day, I'll tell you that much.

    Yeah. This story is pretty much the best I'm reading right now. It's the first one I check for updates when I get on, so. Your writing style is great, the way you add these little voices. They crack me right the hell up, I swear.

    Um. I was really surprised about the whole hospital thing, but I can't say I'll miss it. That heart monitor really pissed me off in Chapter Seven. Damn the nurses and their adherence to their jobs I say.

    But yes. This story is great. I notice that you've started making fewer errors (grammatical and formatting) as the story progresses and grows larger, but that's the only thing wrong with this and even that isn't too big a deal.

    I really hope to see more of this story, and I plan on reading it all the way through!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amazin'grace on December 05, 2007
    TOTALLY cannot wait for more. this is soooo great! can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From TrajaSoryn on December 03, 2007
    Im Loving this story,Im addicted to it.
    Cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Zippo Mother Lover on November 29, 2007
    AMAZING.

    This story is by far the best I've seen for the A7X fandom so far. I love Zacky's little voices...

    More, or I shall die. Please?

    D:
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