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By : ClarkWoodFan
  • From marbleandtoast on August 24, 2010
    What a great story so far!! I really love this couple. lol I hope that you update soon. ok?
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  • From marbleandtoast on August 03, 2010
    Loving this story so far. I hope that there is more soon. :D
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  • From sueage on July 13, 2009
    mk so i about flipped the fuck out when i saw that you you actually finally updated this, lol. it's about damn time, girl. so after the little bit of hotness in the barn and straight into dinner with the fam, eh? loved it. that is kinda one of my fave things about visiting family with someone you are dating...sex right before dinner with none the wiser? yes, please. lol. and the very serious conversation at dinner...lol. totally one of those things you gotta do that no one wants to, but is kinda a necessity to put the parentals at ease, i think. lol.

    kelly saying she was thinking of saving telling her parents until the wedding was freakin priceless, haha. i could imagine that whole little bit play out with her saying that and stephen tripping out, lol. and then the joke about having carole tell them was pretty hilarious, too. i just really loved the awkward humor of it all. i also liked that kelly insisted on clearing the dishes and loading the dishwasher. such a small little detail, but really showed that she still has her head on straight and hasnt gotten too big for her britches and remembers her manners, which is clearly the case given everything we see from her in interviews, etc. so i thought that was a nice touch and showed a lot about her personality.

    kelly stopping dead in her tracks when carole said she was going to get her room ready totally cracked me up, too. the fact that they hadnt thought about their sleeping arrangements and kelly was clearly not happy at them was so something that i could see happening. it's like...oh yeah...just cuz your parents are cool with us dating they arent gonna let us sleep together in their house? bummer. lol. but i thought it was cute how carrie knew exactly what kellly was thinking and whispered in her ear that she would come find her, lol. gotta love the sneakage.

    looooved this:
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    It’s ok,” she reached for her hands. “Now…”
    “Now…” Carrie repeated as she slid on to the bed, crawling slowly over Kelly. She held herself up over her before slowly lowering and pressing their bodies together as she captured her lips.
    Kelly’s hands made their way to the blonde’s neck before they pulled apart. “Now,” she let her hands roam. “I believe we continue what we started earlier…”
    Carrie sighed. “Good,” she pressed her knee against Kelly. “Cause we’ve got some catching up to do.”
    Kelly just nodded, unable to speak as she pulled Carrie’s face towards her. The blonde barely had to do anything to set her off.
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    very simple and subtle, but very hot and effective, also.

    yep...i think this fic is definitely worth continuing, lol. =)
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  • From classic06 on July 10, 2009
    Soooo glad you updated, and i personally think you should do so more often, because this fic is pretty damn great, lol
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  • From tutorgurl on March 29, 2009
    Barns ARE fun. But Dude, you so gotta update this, like pretty please? For the love of Clarkwood, you just gotta! The have matching four leaf clovers! If that doesn't scream commitment, I don't know what does. And also, I think Kelly should so meet Britney while Carrie is around and like Carrie should get all jealous - it'd be amusing. But seriously, kick ass story.
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  • From sueage on January 08, 2009
    *peeks in hoping for an update...doesn't see one...cries a little*
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  • From Mo56 on November 17, 2008
    i love barns.
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  • From classic06 on November 17, 2008
    wooo! loved it, lol. it was hot and cute and funny all rolled into one...perfect. definitely can't wait to see how dinner goes. i hope carrie's parents aren't too, too hard on kelly, lol.
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  • From Mo56 on November 11, 2008
    aw! that was so cute of kelly!!
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  • From sueage on November 11, 2008
    phew...glad that talk with the band went well. i totally LOLed when Chad asked if they were getting fired when Carrie first started talking. and when Kelly called Jimmy out about being into her? so great. poor dude...although, who can blame him? i am happy everything is out in the open, at least with the band. but they definitely need to talk to their families, and pronto, before somebody slips and says something or some photog gets a behind the scenes picture they werent expecting. oh, and i am a huge fan of how cute, sexy, and loving they were in the bedroom. really great update! can't wait for the next one.
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  • From classic06 on November 10, 2008
    lol, is it sad that the main reason i get excited when seeing you reviewed one of my fics is because it means there's a damn good chance you updated yours? lol. definitely glad that the band all seemed to go along with it and didn't have a problem. kelly and carrie in bed was hot as always, lol. i really hope the press goes along with the whole matt/kelly story at least long enough for them to tell their families because that would suck otherwise. great update!
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  • From Mo56 on November 10, 2008
    oh oh oh! i wanna read the chapter when they "make up for lost time"!!! pick mine pick mine! lol i totally sound like a 12 year old boy right now! haha sweet update
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  • From sueage on October 31, 2008
    well that was definitely a nice little twist...lol. i love how matt got all awkward and "saved by the bell" status at the beginning when he thought the dude was talking about kelly being with carrie. so great. can't say im a huge fan of the duplicity of letting people think kelly is with matt, but i can also understand the girls not being ready to come out (so to speak) and tell the public about their relationship quite yet, especially since it is still to new to them and they havent even told their families yet. i am glad carrie is gonna tell her band though, i just hope everyone takes it as well as matt did. for sure interested to see where you go with this. great update, though.
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  • From Mo56 on October 30, 2008
    haha i was kinda reluctant at the idea of kelly and matt pretend dating...but it does kinda seem like the best cover for them both. oh and that was a totally funny comment by carrie band dude "she sure does spend a lot of time with carrie..." awesome update!! i wonder what's gonna happen next???
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  • From sueage on October 28, 2008
    i wonder if someone got a picture of them on that yacht together in australia...definitely curious to know what they have in common with each other that somebody either found out about or is speculating about...and lmao at the britney spears video part; seriously that video is crazy. lol. i loved their playfulness about the internet stuff. oh and the beginning was totally cute with them not wanting to get up but having to--the worst--and that carrie had matt bring kelly's clothes in the bedroom on the bus. and something tells me the band may be a little suspicious. not sure, but it just seemed a little awkward when kelly was meeting them. great update, though! really can't wait for the next one so i hope it is soon!
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